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Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby randomghost » Apr 27th, '08, 09:45

damnnn..lyrics is fucking great man..flow and puchlines...is amazing...beat is hot....i fuckin love the track.... :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby mart85 » Apr 28th, '08, 19:50

nice track man :y: it had a pretty cool vibe, and lyrics were great... flow was nice and delivery too, altho it could always be better, but yeah some tight lay overs will help :y:

good job, keep it up man :8)
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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby Tornado » Apr 28th, '08, 23:15

soory for the wait...damm internet

i already approved the lyrics in creative writing so you know i love the verses...beat sounded god..2nd vers sounded a bit short to me...think your accent helped it sound more gritty, liked it...i would say just get a third verse and redo the chorus as thats the only part that didn't stand out..and maybe some ad libs
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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby C-Game » May 4th, '08, 06:44

da start didnt sound like u... :) it was a lil different...

everythin was crazy man.. a good listen .. not gonna talk about the mixing coz u said it needs fixing.. and i dont see y u have to redo ur 2nd verse.. it seems fine...

great job again... nw no doubt ur one of da best , if not da best lyrically gifted people here on TR... keep it upp :y: :y:
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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby <VerbalTouch> » May 4th, '08, 21:42

k i just took a listen bars got it it just sometime hard to understand what hes sayin probably because of your accent but that sjust me i guess still Ight track :y:
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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby B.A.D. » May 17th, '08, 16:45

bump
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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby Kosovic » May 17th, '08, 16:48

Do i have to hear it before i review it?
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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby Kosovic » May 17th, '08, 21:58

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Scotland stand the fuck up.
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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 18th, '08, 10:28

Alba Gu Brath!!


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=livKKvWzJfM




get it right next time :y:
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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby Xray » May 18th, '08, 10:42

Kosovic wrote:Image

Scotland stand the fuck up.

trying to be racist?
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone


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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby Kosovic » May 18th, '08, 10:57

Trying to be funny........failed miserably.
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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby Kez » May 18th, '08, 11:10

Kosovic wrote:Trying to be funny........failed miserably.


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Re: Bar - Justice(produced by slantize)

Postby Kosovic » May 18th, '08, 11:11

I know i know....give me the "you fail at internet" pic too and we are even.
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