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nice track man it had a pretty cool vibe, and lyrics were great... flow was nice and delivery too, altho it could always be better, but yeah some tight lay overs will help
i already approved the lyrics in creative writing so you know i love the verses...beat sounded god..2nd vers sounded a bit short to me...think your accent helped it sound more gritty, liked it...i would say just get a third verse and redo the chorus as thats the only part that didn't stand out..and maybe some ad libs good work
da start didnt sound like u... it was a lil different...
everythin was crazy man.. a good listen .. not gonna talk about the mixing coz u said it needs fixing.. and i dont see y u have to redo ur 2nd verse.. it seems fine...
great job again... nw no doubt ur one of da best , if not da best lyrically gifted people here on TR... keep it upp
k i just took a listen bars got it it just sometime hard to understand what hes sayin probably because of your accent but that sjust me i guess still Ight track
Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone