SajN - Northern Lights (My verse)

by **°[~CHR!$~]°** » May 19th, '08, 12:45

alreay told you man...
slimm mentioned the accent thing...oh well i have the same problem
and ur flow is unstabil at parts...
delievery-wise u got better from your very very very 1st ttry u showed me...but ur voice still sounds kinda boring
keep practising :y:

by **SajN** » May 19th, '08, 14:02

Thanks for checking out man! :y:

More feeds please :flower:

by **Tornado** » May 20th, '08, 01:33

maybe liven up your voice, and practice pronounciation a bit..but for umixed..sounds good

by **Purple23Haze** » May 20th, '08, 01:43

For pronunciation try not being high you sound high to me maybe a bit drunk,
Who did the beat though thought that shit was tight,
Your flow was good I liked that but like killah said the pronunciation is terrible dude

by **B.A.D.** » May 20th, '08, 05:23

Xray wrote:bumpin this

by **SajN** » May 20th, '08, 11:16

Tornado wrote:maybe liven up your voice, and practice pronounciation a bit..but for umixed..sounds good

Yes man

Thanks for checking out! :worship:

Purple23Haze wrote:For pronunciation try not being high you sound high to me maybe a bit drunk,
Who did the beat though thought that shit was tight,
Your flow was good I liked that but like killah said the pronunciation is terrible dude

Haha, I never drink....

The beat is from RapitFly Beats.
Thanks for feed man :worship:

Big Ax-D wrote:
Xray wrote:bumpin this

by **SajN** » May 23rd, '08, 17:06

Thanks man :y:

More feeds please :flower:

by **SajN** » May 27th, '08, 10:31

BUMP

No one has mentioned the lyrics :unsure:

by **SajN** » May 27th, '08, 15:05

Lyrics posted :y:

by **SajN** » May 27th, '08, 16:29

thanks dawg :y:

Jay-19 is KillahGoat, he's gonna have 1st verse in this song :y:

by **Tash8** » Jun 9th, '08, 18:33

umm first work on your pronouncation, probably your biggest problem... it's mainly your accent that's causing that problem.

flow is umm well, too slow for my taste, especially for a beat that i thought would have been great with fast flow..

keep it up.

by **SajN** » Jun 10th, '08, 08:58

aight Tash. Thanks for checking this out :worship:

More feeds?

by **mart85** » Jun 11th, '08, 16:32

yeah like everybody else said, try to practise your delivery and pronounciation a little more, you really must believe in what you're saying, and be confident, let it all out lol... but it's not bad, it has potential, just keep practising man

by **SajN** » Jun 13th, '08, 15:57

Whoa .. Thanks for checking this out Mart :worship:

I promise .. next time I drop a track you'll hear that I've improved .. I hope :sweating:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jun 14th, '08, 21:19

projection needs to be alot better, scream the verse loudly and clearly a couple of times to get your voice warmed up, make sure you know every word off by heart before recording, rap it loud and clearly over and over and over till it sounds clear, let other listen before making it your final recording to make sure

the flow is there, well more of being on beat, its jsut not exciting, needs more energy lyrics seemed good form i made out, just work on the fundementals of spitting then worry about the lyrical content, keep it up :y:

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