Outta My Mind-Untouchablez

[DelinQuent]

well thanks for feeding at all.


GIVE ME FEEDBACK PEOPLE!

[B.A.D.]

maybe you already know what I'm about to say cuz this is my type of track

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AMAZING!!!, the beat is perfectly unique.. where you got that shit??

club tracks is my favourite lol... the hook is catchy as fuck, good job on there, pik's verse was cool, his rhymes wuz a bit crappy tho', but his flow is real good.

you came back to your old flow, which works perfectly, u know perfectly how to make some creative rhymes on a club track, I like that... last verse was the best

def. one of my favourites from you... I'll keep it on my mp3 & party playlist, I'll see the reaction of a whole party to thisone.

loved it

[<VerbalTouch>]

LOl Ax it kinda sounds like the one you made me but some real feed

Yall sound the same Lol I couldnt really tell this was a feature well I could a little he had like a deeper voice then you did but i guess thats just me. but like I said hot track but i think you were off a lil on tempo.

[DelinQuent]

ha ha ax I knew you'd be feelin this one.

@blue- me and pik sound alike cause we literally grew up together, we been best friends since the first day of first grade lol

[<VerbalTouch>]

No shit? You should do more songs with him then always good to have a brother like that you can rap wit h:y:

[DelinQuent]

Hes PikPocket, I'm DelinQuent and together we're the Untouchablez. We got a bunch of tracks together but we live far away from one another now so its hard to do tracks. Thanks again for the feed.

[Tornado]

Nice Shit..i don't usually fuck with club hip-hop music but its catchy, flow and delievery were spot on..lyrics suffered but hey..its a club tune and i like it

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the feedback man. nobody around here is giving feedback anymore. i give tons of feedback, and i get none. bulllllshittttt. but thanks again, i really appreciate it.

[Speech]

cool track nothing special...dq your last verse was way better than your first...last one was more clearer....and the second guy was cool too...has emotions and ncie quality, exept for the part where my speakers slapped me for listening to it :the part where the quality fucks up big time!!!
chorus was cool..didn sound like it came out the way you wanted it too but it sounds cool

track is nothing special...club thing

keep it up you too...btw the other guy sound like his black..lemme guess..hes not xD

[DelinQuent]

actually PIk (The other guy) is black lmfao i think he sounds white lmao.

yeah there were some pops in the mic but i didn't feel the need to re record the whole verse so i just dipped the volume where it popped. thanks for the feed spizzy.

[Speech]

actually PIk (The other guy) is black lmfao i think he sounds white lmao.

yeah there were some pops in the mic but i didn't feel the need to re record the whole verse so i just dipped the volume where it popped. thanks for the feed spizzy.

so he is black..damn i'm good!!!!! lmao
np man i respect your work

[mart85]

it's not really my favorite type of track but I gotta say it was catchy and that's what club tracks are about so great job on that... the "my my mind" parts just stays stuck in your head lol

keep it up guys

[DelinQuent]

lol thats what everyone i played it for told me. the "my my mind" part stayed stuck in they're head.

thanks for the feed mart.

[neversnooze]

wow this is very good delinquent, it sounds reall professional, do u have any other music i can check out

[DelinQuent]

welcome to the forum neversnooze
since my soundclick is under review you cant listen to music on it.
you can go to my myspace to hear my most recent stuff at http://www.myspace.com/iamdelinquent
there's also a soundclick player that works on my old myspace at http://www.myspace.com/delinquentisdq