C-Riz-16 Bars of Darkness[prod. by Tash8]

[dbeauluvswomen]

I actually like the accent...
hell, i thought your voice fit well with the beat as well
i like that dark stuff though and that beat was perfect imo
i understood everything you said which is good cuz I usual have trouble with different accents
only one spot the flow fell for a split second but none the less can't complain
it was only 16 bars, im gonna have to check out more of your music b/c I think you're pretty good
isnt much of good feed, but just know i liked this track lol you've got good flow..i listened to this like 20 times thats why it took so long to reply..but i couldnt really come out with anything negative.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx man....appreciate it
hmmm so i guess i just leave my accent(tryin to get clearer tho no worries) ..so people live wit it or hate it

[Kez]

In terms of your accent: KEEP IT.

Your accent makes you unique; what, you wanna be like the thousands of other American rappers? Be different. It makes you not only more unique but also more loyal and genuine to your heritage.

As for the track i liked it, you're definately improving.

Liked the beat, lyrics worked, flow is a bit different to normal but in it's own flow it's on point mostly.
Quality good, nice dark concept
You just need to work on your delivery so you don't sound quite so out of breath at times

Good track

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yep thx u two

@chet...C-Riz > Lil Jon hehe

[Speech]

i think i saw the lyrics before..yeah i think so, when i wanted you to spit a 16 for a project for me, but didn happen yet....line sajjad quoted was the best, i love the flow on that rhyme...swicthing up the flow made this enjoyable...beat was cool, i liked it...make more trax dawg

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

u saw the lyrics cant remember showing 'em to ya
anywayz thx for checkin bro

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

bump

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

what does sir killa prefer...is sendspace okayy?

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

http://rapidshare.com/files/134597709/1 ... s.mp3.html

now better check it lol

[Rapsoldier101]

yea most of all i liked the beat, good one tash, i dunno if u make beats this good usualy cuz this is the first iv heard i will deff check u out tho and c-riz good bars, i liked the calendar line

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz man

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thank you killa

[B.A.D.]

first thing I gotta say is beat and mixing is genious excelent job on that

new flow? hahah, sounds real real nice, pronunciation improved and lyrics are masterpiece

nice to see ya'll still alive... its URD!

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the most annoying part.2 coming soon...........

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

bump?