!!NEW!! C-Riz ft SaJJad-On Fire

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thx chet for uppin
and @mart....huh..wutchu mean with u 1st sentence guess u was jokin lol
but yeah waitin for your feed

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thx chet for uppin
and @mart....huh..wutchu mean with u 1st sentence guess u was jokin lol
but yeah waitin for your feed

he was leaving feedback on the non working zshare link saying it sucked


imma check out the track now btw

[mart85]

lol yeah I was talking about the link ^^

I just listened to the track and it was cool

C-Riz, you're delivery and flow got a lot better, you're improving well still room for improvement, but it was enjoyable

hook was real catchy and effective

Sajjad you did good as usual, nice delivery and flow, and you had some good lines

so yeah, it was a fun track, keep it up guys

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thx mart...yeah had a slow moment
for the record its no fun track im damn c-riz will flame y'all
kiddin....thx... yeah always workin towards perfection (would be a nice line to use in a track )

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its time for a bump

[Call Me Pik]

over all i think its a 7.5 outta 10 alot of things such as volume overlays could of been fixed but it was still a decent track stay up..

n peep nike bootz get at me

[Kez]

Took me a while to feed this, i've been busy and falling behind recently

Beat is good

C-Riz, in terms of delivery this is a definite improvement probably your best so far
Your flow is good for the most part, 1 or 2 places it falls off but for the most part it stays on
Still a few moments where the tone of your voice sounds too robotic but very rare now as opposed to before
Lyrics do their job, considering the concept. Some good lines, i liked the "GTA" one
Hook is nice
SaJJad your flow is sick, lyrics are decent

So a pretty good track but i think next track you post should maybe use a diff concept

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thx so much kez
and yeah...more emotional one is on the way lol

[Angevilish]

1st guy (1st & last verses): flow was good, it could be better if didn't slip off in few bars. Delivery was sick, you had the emotions & all. Lyricism was ill, you certainly have skills; I loved those sharp rhymes you got.

2nd guy: flow was better than that of the 1st guy's, but lyricism wasn't there, it was quite simple. Delivery was nice, I liked the voice aswell, it halped him ot harmonize with the beat.

the hook was dope, it actually made this tracks sounds even more better.

good job.

If you got some freetime, I'd appreciate it if you Return The Feed In This Page
Thanx in adavance...

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first verse - c-riz - dam man your flows alot better ont his beat man, defiantly the best i heard from you flow wise, your lyrics are really nice aswell your delivery is good and your prouncation is clear and distinct, great verse defiantly one of your best.


chorus - sick love everything about it


second verse - sajjad - as always your flows sick, "sajjad is a galaxy, your just planet" loved that line, your ylrics are solid rhymes are realyl nice, delivery is awesome, as always you kill it man

Third Verse - c-riz - you dont start as strong as you did in the first, and your flow isnt as strong, you switched your structure a little you should keep the same structure if it sounds good on the beat, but still a ok verse good work.


defiantly one of your best collabs, i read some people talking about the concept..but i mean this isnt a concept track the rappers make this with there lines thats the kinda track it is and i wasnt disapointed, this track shows how important a good chorus is its solid and just blends everything so well, i feel the third verse was a little weak but apart from that it was sick, good stuff


and sorry to keep goin on about the chorus but it just gives it soo much more replay value aswell. keep it up

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thank you bar glad u liked my 1st verse...
and yeah mad propz to sajjad for that crazy hook

[Xray]

@ bar - damn im surprised you actually liked my verse haha....i actually thought that line was cocky but glad you enjoyed the track bro

[yoshi]

lol well done guys

the chorus is the shit, Xray killed it
'sajjad is a galaxy, you just a planet'

Chris got some good lines too

[Xray]

lol well done guys

the chorus is the shit, Xray killed it
'sajjad is a galaxy, you just a planet'

Chris got some good lines too

ohh sweet....thanks for checking

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dzienkue....argh fuck it...failed....thanks