NEW Sajjad & Big Ax-D Collab

[B.A.D.]

thanks to everyone for the feed

[Xray]

Bump mafuckers.

[Tornado]

Beat is reminscent of "When The Music Stops" like Jay said, shouldn't bother with a hook, just use it as a intro to the next rappers verse

Saj, you'r e on point for the most part, just one or two words slurred due to the faster way you're approaching the track but still solid on all points as usual.

Ax-D, lyrics have improved (maybe it the type of track) but i just don't get the lastline but w/ever, your pronouncinatin ruined the verse, again with the syllable thing in your verse, makes you rush your words

Overall decent but room for improvement

[_Ironic_]

beat sounds like some eminem shit, pretty nice

Xray - Decent scheme here, honestly I've heard u go in better though...delivery was nice lyrics were your strong point, worth a second listen.

Big Ax - You had a nice flow here but u slipped a couple times...your delivery was better on this imo. lyrics were simple yet effective, well done

overall dope track guys,

9/10

rtf if u can:
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[Nu Syd]

wow, amazin song here, love both verses, really well delivered and on point, DAYUM

[Xray]

Big ups on the feedback to all.

[macdaddy019967]

oh good man...last i heard from you was at the trshady myspace...what happened with that anywayz?

[B.A.D.]

bringin this up bitches

[Tash8]

cool song, both of you did good. beat was kinda wack at times then everything kicked in and it was amazing...

[Xray]

Props for the feed Tash.

[randomghost]

ill beat sounds like random n crack type loved how sajjad started..he raped the fuckin beat hot flow...amazing delivery lyrics is gud 2...axd fuckin rip it 2....hot delivery bro....flow and lyrics simply amazing gr8 track....i can do something wid da hook holla if ya interseted..

[B.A.D.]

ill beat sounds like random n crack type loved how sajjad started..he raped the fuckin beat hot flow...amazing delivery lyrics is gud 2...axd fuckin rip it 2....hot delivery bro....flow and lyrics simply amazing gr8 track....i can do something wid da hook holla if ya interseted..

hell yeah man, that would be amazing, send a pm to sajjad to send you the track, there's also a third verse open

[B.A.D.]

buampa

[Emadyville]

I enjoyed it man, lyrics were dope, rhymes were pretty nice, flow was definitely on point as well as delivery. Mixing sounded fine man this was a dope drop good work

[Slim Zaddy]

beat is pretty dope .. it's catchy ,, sajjad was on madly control ,, you flowed nice and smooth and ya verse,, is dope ... good job homie

BIG Ax-D .. your verse was fire . i liked they way you started it .. then start going fast,, you flowed well through the verse ,, delivery was amazing ,, nothing to comment on ,,

overall , it's was a dope collab ,, looking for more in the future ....... keep it up guys