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Re: 2 NEW Steve Spag Tracks!

Postby SajN » Oct 16th, '10, 01:03

Wilderbeast:

I liked the beat, it had something special. You're being a lil too much cocky, aren't you :p
It was good, the lyrics are very good, and especially, since it has been so long time since I heard you or read your lyrics, I can tell you've improved :y: Good shit... Not so fan of the voice in this track though. But the rest was good, I liked the hook as well.

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Lol, I can see why others are writing to it too. It's really good hook and beat. I like your voice in this one. The lyrics are good, but maybe not as good as your other stuff. Hmm, it's only one verse, I see. Anyway, it's good for being a short song. I think I liked this better :y:
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Re: 2 NEW Steve Spag Tracks!

Postby Tash8 » Oct 16th, '10, 22:05

straight up, i see watchu doing with the wilderbeast flow n all but it just ain't workin...it's kinda annoying actually.. second verse was much more fluent and easier to listen to.

and this is other track...uh douchebags doesn't rhyme with either line..ok track for what it was but it's incomplete
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Re: 2 NEW Steve Spag Tracks!

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 17th, '10, 00:50

^^
Thanks for the feed guys!
But douche bag does rhyme Tash, it's a slant rhyme.
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Re: 2 NEW Steve Spag Tracks!

Postby Tash8 » Oct 17th, '10, 18:57

Steve Spag wrote:^^
Thanks for the feed guys!
But douche bag does rhyme Tash, it's a slant rhyme.
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you didn't make it sound like it rhymed..that's all i'm saying
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Re: 2 NEW Steve Spag Tracks!

Postby Arabian Shady » Oct 18th, '10, 13:30

HAHA the beat reminds me of something BIG would spit on,lol
Aiyo you're delivery is pretty much awesome by now. I like how you control the beat.
The chorus is awesome. lol i shud tell you that the chorus does the lyrics jistification. That egotistic cocky shit goes well with the rest of the track. Like i can actually imagine myself in the corridor talkin to a dude and if he says something wierd i cock my head back and go "IM...DA SHIIIIIITT MAAAAAANN"
lmfao
Lyrics were well written, moderate complexity and still enjoyable...just how i like em.
I must say, excellent choice of beat
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Re: 2 NEW Steve Spag Tracks!

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 18th, '10, 17:11

Arabian Shady wrote:HAHA the beat reminds me of something BIG would spit on,lol
Aiyo you're delivery is pretty much awesome by now. I like how you control the beat.
The chorus is awesome. lol i shud tell you that the chorus does the lyrics jistification. That egotistic cocky shit goes well with the rest of the track. Like i can actually imagine myself in the corridor talkin to a dude and if he says something wierd i cock my head back and go "IM...DA SHIIIIIITT MAAAAAANN"
lmfao
Lyrics were well written, moderate complexity and still enjoyable...just how i like em.
I must say, excellent choice of beat
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Couldn't have asked for better feed, thanks brother!
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