by Tash8 » Apr 18th, '07, 18:37
I'll feed as I listen:
All That She Wants -
Cool Beat. Verse 1 is pretty sick, i like it. Chorus is aite for a sample. second verse is basicly like the first verse, really sick. I like the effects you use. the first part of the third verse i wasn't feeling, but the rest was pretty sick. Overall I liked this song..
Pain in My Words -
Beat fits the subject, the first verse I didn't like, it sounded like you just didn't want to put energy. The chorus sounds pretty weird, but thats it's in a good way. Second verse starts real hot, and continues to be hot. Emotion is great on this because it's supposed to be a sad/emotional song right? The chorus I just don't like for the sosng thou. Overall I love this song.
Lord Forgive Me -
The beat so far is just not my type. and You don't sound like your trying on this track. The chorus sounds pretty sick, kinda catchy. The second verse is hot. Overall this song is OK, I thought you could do better on it
Hotel California -
Let's just say it wasn't your best. the beat wasn't great, and since I know Hotel California and I love that song, this just doesn't work man. Nice try though.
My Words Could Destroy -
This reminds me of Words are Weapons by D12, the beat is pretty simple but good. Lyrics sounded good. the first verse, worked with the beat real well. I don't know who did the second verse, but it didn't fit the first one. Good Song, one of the tops soo far. Third Verse, I think it's by random ghost right? it sounds aite but like i said different than the other two.
Konvicts Music -
Did you try to do the Akon Konvict thing at the beginning lol? Beat's drumming was really bad, and i just didn't like the song. it just didn't fit what so ever. no hate, but i didn't feel it. Especially how the chorus didn't fit the song didn't fit the verses.
Tragedy -
Beat sounds GREAT! verse 1 was amazing! fit the beat well and lyrics were good and you just did great on this one. Chorus sounds great, verse 2 sounding even better than the first one. I love it so far. My favorite song so far. I'll listen to the others later, i just gotta go somewhere now.
I'll try to finish this feed later, but so far there are some songs that I LOVE like tragedy, but there's some like Konvicts Music which ehh not so much.
I really liked parts of it. man keep it up, I love the songs where you just showed your emotions and stuff.
Keep it up,
Tash8