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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 19th, '07, 12:39

listen while writin:

beat is dope....and dunno ..much echo in chorus(i guess)....but verse is fire... :) :worship:
lyrics are kool...and ur flow is aight :smoking:
good work on it :worship:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Apr 21st, '07, 02:57

Track's sick. Verses are insane and I like the hook a lot. I'm looking forward to all the projects you mentioned, I'm sure they'll be well worth the wait :worship:
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Postby HAYZI » Apr 21st, '07, 23:04

ThomasAguanis wrote:Track's sick. Verses are insane and I like the hook a lot. I'm looking forward to all the projects you mentioned, I'm sure they'll be well worth the wait :worship:



thanks tom i aprreciate it, thats my favourite kinda feed :p
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Postby HAYZI » Apr 26th, '07, 17:49

bump :whistle:
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Postby DOPE » Apr 27th, '07, 08:22

the last shit i heard of you was that Stick Up song u posted long time ago man


this one is real sick , your delivery is right on point
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Postby HAYZI » Apr 30th, '07, 12:39

DOPE wrote:the last shit i heard of you was that Stick Up song u posted long time ago man


this one is real sick , your delivery is right on point



thanks dope long time no see, glad u liked it
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Postby AspirinE » Apr 30th, '07, 12:50

Dope, i found it hard to understand some parts because im not from UK, but i like the delivery as many said. I heard the first version before but forgot to feed, im glad u fixed up the hook a bit.

U could use some effects to make the beat and the acapela fit a bit more though
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Postby HAYZI » Apr 30th, '07, 13:08

AspirinE wrote:Dope, i found it hard to understand some parts because im not from UK, but i like the delivery as many said. I heard the first version before but forgot to feed, im glad u fixed up the hook a bit.

U could use some effects to make the beat and the acapela fit a bit more though



thanks for the feed man i appreciate it, for the most part i think the acapella fits the beat but for the 1st half of the second verse it does sound a bit dodgy,
again thanks for the feed asp
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Postby AspirinE » Apr 30th, '07, 13:12

HAYZI wrote:
AspirinE wrote:Dope, i found it hard to understand some parts because im not from UK, but i like the delivery as many said. I heard the first version before but forgot to feed, im glad u fixed up the hook a bit.

U could use some effects to make the beat and the acapela fit a bit more though



thanks for the feed man i appreciate it, for the most part i think the acapella fits the beat but for the 1st half of the second verse it does sound a bit dodgy,
again thanks for the feed asp



i basically think it fits too, im just saying everything can always be better, nahmeeeeen? :p

BTW? did u make the beat?

Im still up for colab by the way, we never really got to finish any shit planned before man.
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Postby HAYZI » May 2nd, '07, 15:49

AspirinE wrote:
HAYZI wrote:
AspirinE wrote:Dope, i found it hard to understand some parts because im not from UK, but i like the delivery as many said. I heard the first version before but forgot to feed, im glad u fixed up the hook a bit.

U could use some effects to make the beat and the acapela fit a bit more though



thanks for the feed man i appreciate it, for the most part i think the acapella fits the beat but for the 1st half of the second verse it does sound a bit dodgy,
again thanks for the feed asp



i basically think it fits too, im just saying everything can always be better, nahmeeeeen? :p

BTW? did u make the beat?

Im still up for colab by the way, we never really got to finish any shit planned before man.



nah i didnt make the beat im not usin my beats as much these days altho another track ive just finished is my beat

yeh im defo up for collabs with u man, if u got any ideas/concepts pm me, and ill do the same
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