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Postby Kez » Apr 28th, '07, 12:38

Listening while typing

This probably has to be one of my favourites of you so far.
DC your beat is great
Bar your flow on this is fuckin hot :worship:
I love the hook as well
One thing you could of done is multitracked and said "you can't blame me" seperately, might of made it easier to do the rest of the hook
Just a suggestion

But anyway i like it, so i don't know what else to put, but good job Bar :worship:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 28th, '07, 12:50

Kez wrote:Listening while typing

This probably has to be one of my favourites of you so far.
DC your beat is great
Bar your flow on this is fuckin hot :worship:
I love the hook as well
One thing you could of done is multitracked and said "you can't blame me" seperately, might of made it easier to do the rest of the hook
Just a suggestion

But anyway i like it, so i don't know what else to put, but good job Bar :worship:


thx man :worship: and yeh i see what your saying but i'd class that as a more manufacture flow ya know :sweating: for it to be true flow you should be able to spit the lyrics fully live :sweating:

thx for checking n glad you liked it :worship:
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Postby Kez » Apr 28th, '07, 12:57

Well if that's the effect you were going for then fair enough
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Postby DJ.Parker » Apr 28th, '07, 15:04

the song is cool. Slow song so I didnt really notice heavy rapping in it but I did notice that the song is deep :D Love it since its really different from other tracks. Well done bro keep flowing

I went through the lyrics and it's really sad story. Great song again :flower: Nothing bad to say about it
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 28th, '07, 17:30

DJ.Parker wrote:the song is cool. Slow song so I didnt really notice heavy rapping in it but I did notice that the song is deep :D Love it since its really different from other tracks. Well done bro keep flowing

I went through the lyrics and it's really sad story. Great song again :flower: Nothing bad to say about it


thx man :worship:

yeh it never was wirtten to be a hard rap song..more like just a song..rapped :whistle: if that makes sense lol :sweating:

glad you liked it n thx for the feed :worship:
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 28th, '07, 17:37

listen while typin....
damn lyrics are good :happy:
and flow is kool....
good job...*waits fo tape*
hook got me :worship:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 28th, '07, 18:27

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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 28th, '07, 18:38

mayn u now this is my kinda track....

if you really listen to the lyrics you'll see how it really hits u up.... I'm lovin it

the hook is koo on what it says, but its kinda weird

you sound too low on your verses, but its aight, u can still listen to them lyrics...

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 28th, '07, 19:36

30-3 wrote:mayn u now this is my kinda track....

if you really listen to the lyrics you'll see how it really hits u up.... I'm lovin it

the hook is koo on what it says, but its kinda weird

you sound too low on your verses, but its aight, u can still listen to them lyrics...

big propz fam :worship: :worship: 10/10


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Postby Xray » Apr 29th, '07, 02:54

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Postby randomghost » Apr 29th, '07, 05:05

tight track man...flow is hot beat is dope as fuck..good work bar :flower:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 29th, '07, 16:29

Killa wrote:best track ive heard from you for real. great job ima be playing this for awhile


thanx man :worship:


thx randy :worship:

n lol @sajjad :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 1st, '07, 00:49

bump :8)
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Postby Inches » May 1st, '07, 01:18

ill feed soon, im bumpin MF riht now and dont wnna turn it down
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Postby Inches » May 1st, '07, 02:29

Allright, listening while typing.
First of, im feelin the guitarr
Deep lyrics man, flows allright,
Great production ( props DC )
The hook is pretty good aswell,

Definitly one of the greater tracks ive heard from you man
keep this up

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