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dont get me wrong i don wanna find no stupid excuse..but there are ppl that just don have as much brain to spit the sickest lyrics, but they still have a passion for this...but how to make a track better if your not able to rap like the sickest rhymer of the world?...work on a track, to make shit better...believe me..if i had a vinnie paz mind, id be using that shit, i just can't rhyme every single word in a bar...so what? i still have brain to let everything sound creative...holla

fair enough i get that, but (i hate using myself as an example coz it sounds like i love myself but i obviously cant comment about other peoples expeirences) i couldnt rhyme for shit but i learned to, i remember while back i used to post rhymes were i had actually sat with a dictionary and thesauraus and learned more words, bigger words ect. but i know not having the laungage as your native tounge is obviously a factor, and i give props to anyone who had to learn english rapping in english no matter the lyrics.

but again, rhymes arent the only thing to make it more complex, some nice wordplay, even just great concepts, or lines that make you think, there's lots of dope artists that dont rhyme every lines, some rappers dont even rhyme that good but are awesome wordplay, concept, lyric wise (sway is one i can think off and he is in my top 5) punchlines aswell, i mean if your gonni not have any of these and just flow words with great emotion and delivery to average concepts, sure you can delivery a verse, but thats it ya know.

but like ya said at the end, even if you aint complex, if its creative thats sick, but im a beileiver that no matter what style your doin there should be attempt at complexity, i aint saying every bar rhymes just nice multis a little wordplay maybe a little punchline that makes the person laugh just something like that. tracks without them are pointless to me but thats just my mind frame loads of other people probly just like to bump to the flow.

[Speech]

dont get me wrong i don wanna find no stupid excuse..but there are ppl that just don have as much brain to spit the sickest lyrics, but they still have a passion for this...but how to make a track better if your not able to rap like the sickest rhymer of the world?...work on a track, to make shit better...believe me..if i had a vinnie paz mind, id be using that shit, i just can't rhyme every single word in a bar...so what? i still have brain to let everything sound creative...holla

fair enough i get that, but (i hate using myself as an example coz it sounds like i love myself but i obviously cant comment about other peoples expeirences) i couldnt rhyme for shit but i learned to, i remember while back i used to post rhymes were i had actually sat with a dictionary and thesauraus and learned more words, bigger words ect. but i know not having the laungage as your native tounge is obviously a factor, and i give props to anyone who had to learn english rapping in english no matter the lyrics.

but again, rhymes arent the only thing to make it more complex, some nice wordplay, even just great concepts, or lines that make you think, there's lots of dope artists that dont rhyme every lines, some rappers dont even rhyme that good but are awesome wordplay, concept, lyric wise (sway is one i can think off and he is in my top 5) punchlines aswell, i mean if your gonni not have any of these and just flow words with great emotion and delivery to average concepts, sure you can delivery a verse, but thats it ya know.

but like ya said at the end, even if you aint complex, if its creative thats sick, but im a beileiver that no matter what style your doin there should be attempt at complexity, i aint saying every bar rhymes just nice multis a little wordplay maybe a little punchline that makes the person laugh just something like that. tracks without them are pointless to me but thats just my mind frame loads of other people probly just like to bump to the flow.

aaaaall true man aaaall true...idk about other rappers here..but i'm not sleeping on what i got..i'm still learning english where i can...it's easier for me to keep shit in mind cuz i'm half american and i used to hang out with americans, but fuck it...just wanted to say that i'm (and i think soeme other rappers here too) ain sleeping on their english skillz...so later, i can make a track sound nice PLUS the nice lyrics ..might take some time, but nobody was born a master
so everybody keep workin ^ ^

back on track

DL THE GOLDEN AGE FUCKERS!!!!!!!!!!!
Ax i see you

[DelinQuent]

DLing now, will feel asap. i'll edit this post

EDIT-this will be very short, deal with it lol

1-flow sounds good, lyrics sound ok. wasn't feelin the chorus. 6/10
2-i'm feelin the flow in the start here. didn't like when you switched your voice. chorus is extremely simple, but i kinda liked it. WTF IS THAT MOANING IN THE BACKGROUND?!?! lol 7/10
3-i've heard this beat lol. the singing in the start did no favors. didn't like your voice in the start of this track. but i'm feelin this the most so far, rhymes sound nice. the chorus is good, i like it. the singing around 2:30. no. lol 7/10
4-like the beat intro, the singing is ruining the chorus. this song reminds me of "My Buddy" by G-Unit. flow was ok, lyrics were ok. i like the intro to kez's verse. kez's flow falls off in a couple places, but it was a decent feature. 5/10 for the hook
5- i'm hatin this song to be honest. you're flow and rhymes are great. but you seem to be talking about things that you don't do, driving escalades, wearing grills in your mouth, idk. not my type of track at all. 0/10
6-i heard this already, solid track, don't really like the hook on this. 5/10
7-another track i'm not feelin. don't like the concept, pointless in my opinion. your flow is good tho, rhymes are also pretty solid. 3/10
8-@ Bar, i said "If you ain't know you know it now, make a bitch fallin love" lol.
9-love the start of this beat. i like this concept. lyrics are hot, it's like i can relate to you on this one, which makes me like it. i like the hook. random... i can't get over his voice, not feelin it. 9/10 loved it
10-i don't like this beat. lol. here ya go again with driving porche's and yadda yadda. don't like it. don't like the chorus. kez's lyrics seem like eminem in "one day at a time", good feature tho, nice lyrics and flow. c-riz good quality, he sounds kinda jerky like he's unsure of what he's saying next, not bad tho. tash, never heard him rap before, rhymes sound forced, not a good verse. 5/10
11-i like the sample, i like this one. another down tempo song i relate to. verses are good. i heard a line that was rushed to fit in the 1st verse.
12-not into weed songs, but your flow is sick and your rhymes are good too. the hook is good too. spizzy, holy shit, verse is fucking sick, he killed you on your own shit lol. i started out hating this song, but it's actually one of the best so far. 8/10
13-intro is weird... wtf? lol. bar's verse doesn't have good flow to it, wasn't into it. chorus fits the beat like crazy, i like it. your verse has a good flow to it, delivery is also good. kez, lmfao, all i heard was "anal penetration" lmfao, flow falls off at points, lyrics... are disgusting lol. 8/10
14-not a fan of the beat, don't like the chorus. flow is fast but it fits the beat so it's good. you're hard to understand in parts. 5/10
15-beat sounds sick, rhymes out the ass damn, good flow. chorus is pretty good. bar, i can't understand a damn word, but the flow sounds good (why was his quality so bad?). spizzy, the end of this verse was crazy, good shit. mobrat, he sounded like he hated spitting his verse, bad feature. restlesswon, flow is hot, he also sounded kinda bored, but he actually had some lyrics so it was ok, decent feature. 7/10
16-beat sounds good. i'm feelin this verse, flow is good, rhymes are good especially the kennedy's line. chorus is hot. good track 8/10
17-hot track, random, that voice lol. but it's a good verse. sajjad's verse was crazy. ax good verse as well. i like the end that sajjad did. 9/10
18-i have this beat, fuckin crazy beat. i like the chorus, first verse is amazing, love the flow. good lyrics. the weird singing ya did in the middle nearly ruins the entire song. my fave song on this album. 9/10
19-that girl... yuck. but that beat is INSANE. ax, vocals seem low, verse was okay. i wasn't feelin that girl at all tho. 1/10

ok, that was longer than i thought it'd be. overall i'd rate the entire cd about a 7/10. personally i think you need to drop the singing and stick to rapping. great job tho

[B.A.D.]

thanks a lot for the entire breakdown man, apreciate your comments

seems like it wasn't your type of album, I tried my best at this one but.. well

thanks anyways, apreciate the feed n comments

[DelinQuent]

yeah not my type of album and that's where the low rating come in. lyrically and flow wise this was a VERY solid album. but my ratings are based on my personal likes and dislikes. i honestly haven't heard you flowing or rapping this good ever, you've definately improved since the first time i ever heard you rap.

[B.A.D.]

yeah not my type of album and that's where the low rating come in. lyrically and flow wise this was a VERY solid album. but my ratings are based on my personal likes and dislikes. i honestly haven't heard you flowing or rapping this good ever, you've definately improved since the first time i ever heard you rap.

thanks I apreciate that man, and thanks again for the breakdown

[Kez]

kez's lyrics seem like eminem in "one day at a time"

Oh what, just because it says "There will never be another me" at the start??

[DelinQuent]

and then you say there'll never be another ax and the rest. but yes, just the beginning lol

[Tash8]

yo everyone, my GO BANG verse wasn't mean tfor this beat, that's why it sounds os effin bad

[B.A.D.]

yo everyone, my GO BANG verse wasn't mean tfor this beat, that's why it sounds os effin bad

lol

I think I'm the only one who thinks it sounds good... I liked it

[Nu Syd]

yeah not my type of album and that's where the low rating come in.

then your review is to biased to be taken seriously imo, you should have reviewed with an open mind and gave credit where credit is due wether the song is your style or not. imo

Ay Axd, ill try review your album asap man,my nets fuckin up at home so ill get at you soon.

[Nu Syd]

^^^ yea but 7/10 is still really damn high for a type of album that isn't his type

I was replying to the comment in general, I didn't see/notice a 7/10 , which yes is not low at all, IMO anything under 5 is below average, but yeh, a direct response to that comment. =)

[B.A.D.]

it doesn't matter

any comment, weather is good or bad is more than apreciated

thanks to both for commentin

[Cwayon_Murder]

Haven't really downloaded anything around here, but I'll be sure to download this and The Prequel sometime tomorrow.
I'm really no good at giving reviews, but I'll try my best ^^

[B.A.D.]

Haven't really downloaded anything around here, but I'll be sure to download this and The Prequel sometime tomorrow.
I'm really no good at giving reviews, but I'll try my best ^^

thanks a lot man, apreciate it a lot!