the track is great man

nice topic, nice vibe, I enjoyed it
I would say the beat is fine, it works for what it is, and it sets the tone for the track. But you asked for feedback so I'll try to write a little more lol... Like I explained in the other thread, I think the drums are the most important thing in a beat. In this case, I think the kick could be a little more powerful, it could be more bass-y. Or maybe you could add some bass instead. As far as the instruments, I think it's fine for what it is.
So yeah, I would suggest trying to get a better low-end, make sure you have a banging kick and/or some good bass, so that you have solid foundations. After that the rest should be fine. And personally, I usually only have the kick and the bass for my lower frequencies. If you add a synth that has a lot of low frequencies, it might "ruin" your low end. Altho I don't think it's the case in this track.
but like I said, the overall track (including the beat) is real nice, it's a great concept track, good job on that
