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[mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 20th, '07, 13:02

bump :happy:
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby mart85 » Aug 20th, '07, 16:40

finally, here's my review:

01: good flow.... I prefered the first part tho... I thought you were a little too early during the forgot about dre beat, altho as it went along, it got better... I prefered your delivery on the 2nd part tho

2: it's alright... not really my type of song, but you flowed well...

3: I liked that track more... you flowed well and had a better delivery

4: it was nice, chorus was catchy, some layovers would help in that type of chorus tho... and I Liked the last verse with your lower voice, it was cool :y:

5: I thought your delivery/pronounciation in the 1st and 3rd verse fitted nice in this... still needs a little more emotion in your voice, but your voice sounded better I thought in those verses

6: cool skit... some echo/reverb would have been good to add that "live" sound, but it was alright

7: my opinion is a little different on this track cause i heard it 3463 times while mixing it lol... I think it's one of your best, you flowed well to the beat and I especially liked the bridge :y:

8: nice, different type of track, I liked the beat a lot in this... I thought the vocals could be louder... and you could have more emotion in your voice, but it was still nice, I prefer that style from you :y:

9: already left feed

10: sick hook from Ax-D... nice flow chris, your delivery was a little better in this I think... and nice verse Ax-D... I was feelign that track :y:

11: already left feed, but nice track

overall, nice job, the biggest "flaw" is your delivery/pronounciation... especially cause your style kinda requires a lot of energy/emotion in your voice, so it makes it more obvious... and I thought there were too many similar songs...

but just keep on practising and you'll get better quickly :y: try to really practise your songs like 325235 times before recording them, to the point where you know all the lyrics without having to look at them, and you got the flow perfectly... this way you won't have to worry about those things, all you'll have to do is worry about the delivery/emotion in your voice :y:

keep it up :8)
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby C-Game » Aug 20th, '07, 16:42

will leave feed . downloadin nw
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 20th, '07, 18:24

mad propz fo this breakdown mart :worship: keep ur tips in my mind :y:
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby Tash8 » Aug 23rd, '07, 02:27

bump
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby Kez » Aug 23rd, '07, 03:06

How many times are you gonna bump this shit
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby Tash8 » Aug 23rd, '07, 03:08

Kez wrote:How many times are you gonna bump this shit


are u shitting me?

ur complaining about this getting bumpped, when big ax-d has been bumping his for 10 times longer?
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 23rd, '07, 03:19

Tash8 wrote:
Kez wrote:How many times are you gonna bump this shit


are u shitting me?

ur complaining about this getting bumpped, when big ax-d has been bumping his for 10 times longer?


don't get me into this shit, If I bump its my problem ok?

and my tape deserves to get bumped :angry:
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 23rd, '07, 03:21

matta fact

kez, help me bump my tape again
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby Tash8 » Aug 23rd, '07, 03:24

30-3 wrote:
Tash8 wrote:
Kez wrote:How many times are you gonna bump this shit


are u shitting me?

ur complaining about this getting bumpped, when big ax-d has been bumping his for 10 times longer?


don't get me into this shit, If I bump its my problem ok?

and my tape deserves to get bumped :angry:


i got no problem with ur tape being bumped, and if you notice i bumped it for ya lol, but i'm saying why does someone complain about somethign when there's someone else right there doing the same thing but only one gets flamed for it?
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby Kez » Aug 23rd, '07, 04:39

Tash8 wrote:i got no problem with ur tape being bumped, and if you notice i bumped it for ya lol, but i'm saying why does someone complain about somethign when there's someone else right there doing the same thing but only one gets flamed for it?


Flamed? Who's flaming? I just wondered

I'll remember not to mention it in future.

Reflectin back i spose it's okay to bump after 3 days i just assumed it was one of those things where it had been bumped shitloads of times and that was why it had 4 pages. So my mistake, i take it back
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Aug 23rd, '07, 11:08

umm yea...bump..lol
naww thx fo refreshin my thread guys :y: haha
and cgame the review :D :flower:
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby C-Game » Sep 4th, '07, 18:17

will leave review 2mo or day aftr for sure.. :y:
im now listenin to individual tracks on TR

mixtapes take time :)
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Sep 25th, '07, 16:18

sry fo bumpin...but i still get SOME reviews :whistle:
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Re: [mixtape] C-Riz - Taking Over!!!!

Postby C-Game » Sep 28th, '07, 20:31

defintly expect feed 2mo :y:
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