[Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

its not like i cant take your honestly...but what u mean with too much energy..i was told to put as much energy in it as possible

[Jay_LP1]

well about that song , energy is required but you're putting extra which is not essential . And that extra energy is ruining ur verse . tryin lowering down ur energy a lil bit

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

oh i see....well its true..i really need to find the right voice control,right lyrics etc...its still a hard,hard way for me....but we'll see.... thx again

[Jay_LP1]

yeah try to think more creatively and about new topics . This way you can improve your lyrics

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

aite ok...i'll keep it in my mind...but lets keep my thread clean

[Kez]

lol seriously dude . So you're saying that people who don't have a good pronunciation don't know what a good pronunciation is?

Stop acting like a kid and grow up

No, i'm saying that you should be able to appreciate how hard it is to make pronunciation sound good if it's not your original native language.

[Jay_LP1]

yeah I know , I'm an Indian . I know how hard it is. if I'm not uploading a new song that doesn't mean I'm not working over it. I'm just waiting for the right time

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

woohooo...5pages...full of bullshit talk...now lets keep it clean (again)...and let other drop their reviews

[Xray]

lol considering i wrote the chorus there's no way you could say sajjad would have been better coz he wouldnt have written the same chorus lol

true


intro: cough *made by me* cough, considering i made the intro its crazy as fuck.

Awake:
verse 1: lyrics are good, flow is good but could of been better.
chorus: matches beat, and dope.
verse 2: no fall off here, nice shit like verse 1.
verse 3: exact like verse 1 & 2 good.
beat: nice.

overall: good song 7/10 cause you run out of breath and your flow becomes choppy when you do that, so my advice is drink ALOT of water before recording or fill your stomach up with food and than record, i have the same problem.

We Are Back:
chorus: crazy flow and good lyrics from bar on it. just one thing that i relised thats said wrong is, the way you said "we roll on they gone run son?" sounded like you said "we roll on nigga run son" lol.
verse 1: your flow is great, lyrics are good. but your pronunciation is poor at times. you exaggerate words too much some times, for example: you say I >>>iiiiiii.
verse 2: it was a different beat to what i normally rap on, so i had to switch the flow.
beat: good.

overall: work on your i's lol 7/10.

What I Did:
beat: simple but crazy as fuck.
chorus: flow is dope, but i think you should of put some overlays after each line cause its like this atm. blah blah blah.*stops* blah blah blah *stops*, should of been. blah blah blah *yeah* blah blah blah *what* know what im saying?
verse 1: damn the flow is insane on this, lyrics and emotion put on it is dope.
verse 2: still good, no fall off, your flow is improving man

overall: you should do more to your songs when mixing, do something that you haven't done before 8/10 cause the chorus was really dope just needed adlibs.

No More Hate:
beat: dope fucken beat.
intro: nice change to your usual work.
chorus: there we go again, iiiiiii you love that word alot lol..doesnt change the fact that the chorus is ILL!.
verse 1: sick shit, flowed perfect.
verse 2: your voice fucked up on the second verse, went from rough to soft and high pitched.
verse 3: again your voice got worn out here.

overall: not bad 6/10.

Psycho:
beat: damn beat is iLL as fuck, first time you use this type of beat. wise choice.
verse 1: didnt understand everything but the flow was good, emotion was there too.
chorus: holy shit, thats some nice chorus spizzy..dope as fuck mixing on it too.
verse 2: spizzy you son of a lyrics were some great shit, you definitely ripped it up.
verse 3: much more understanding this time, lyrics are good, flow is also.

overall: really hot chorus and because of that chorus and that ILL as FUCK BEAT!! i gotta give this 9/10 my fav song so far, is it possible to make a remix? lol.

Pressure:
beat: good beat.
chorus: nice shit, really good.
verse 1: lyrics again are cool and the flow is still ripping that shit up.
verse 2: exact the same with verse 1 which i think is great to keep both verses leveled the same

overall: not my type of song but it was good 7/10.

Raise Ya Lighter:
beat: one dope fucken beat.
verse 1: nice start to the song, lyrics are good, flow is ill.
chorus: first time you got aggression in your voice this much, no complaints on your accent, been there done that lol. crazy chorus man really tight.
verse 2: tight shit again.
verse 3: first time you appear on a colab on someones album and you do great. im saying that cause your always down on colabs but this one. dope shit man. you ripped it.

overall: 9/10 really nice song is it possible for a remix?

I Pray:
beat: man you have too much south sounding beats.
chorus: only thing in the song thats ok.
verse 1: really poor verse, the flow and delivery sucks.
verse 2: sorry man didn't like this either, slow beats don't suit you.

overall: 5/10 didn't think it was any good.

To Be Different:
beat: about time you use something like this, some good beat.
chorus: good shit but you didn't make it so.
verse 1: cool verse, lyrics are cool too.
verse 2: good verse just the volume of the beat is over powering your verse.
verse 3: about time the beat settles down lol..cool verse

overall: cool song but nothing special 7/10

rest is coming soon.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx sajjad...but ur review is pretty messed up lol...no attack...still thx for checkin
oh well bump

[C-Game]

listenin to raise ya lighter while uppin ...

ok ur name is C-Riz.. till den i thought it was pronounced Chris..
name concept stealer...

first huge props man.. damn .. da last time i heard one of ur tracks it was in a different level.. and this song its a whole new level..
quality and flow is the biggest improvements im feelin.. defintly feelin this track
bar on the chorus and last verse eh?... good job..

ill check ur whole tape wen i hv time man...

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thank you very much man...
and sorry about the name concept...thatz how the game works haha kidding

[Tornado]

cool man, downloading review soon

[Tornado]

Overall, album was solid, if a little short. Your lyrics were ok, but i like your flow, delivery was sometimes off but most off time couldnt be faulted (apart from No More Hate Chorus, which seemed to have one of your voices off timed or something). Concepts were ok, but nutting special, beats and production was good and suited you.Best Tracks are Raise Your Lighter, Psycho and No More Hate

Keep it up bro

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx man
yea i fucked up the No More Hate chorus