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Postby mart85 » Mar 13th, '07, 16:48

thanks random for the review... I'm glad you liked my beats :happy:

and thanks to everybody else who listened to the EP and left feedback
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Postby Enimee » Mar 13th, '07, 23:42

Mart u hittin it hot 4 real no lie on that shit, and i cant be bothered to d/l all of it right now for 1 cuz i think bar is a waste of life and talent and for 2 cuz well i dont wnna but yeah good job mart 4 reals
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 14th, '07, 00:37

Enimee wrote:Mart u hittin it hot 4 real no lie on that shit, and i cant be bothered to d/l all of it right now for 1 cuz i think bar is a waste of life and talent and for 2 cuz well i dont wnna but yeah good job mart 4 reals


thx man :flower: :laughing:
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Postby yoshi » Mar 14th, '07, 17:53

hey Bar hun, i finally had time to listen to it :sweating: sorry, but i'm not gonna give that long ass feedback, mainly because i liked the whole tapel, so there's no point in writin everywhere "great lyrics n shit yeah, awesome blah blah blah n kiss my ass :smoking: " lol anyway, i loved it and i'm so proud of you Bar, cuz you really improved - not only lyrically but also technically :happy: :flower: yeh, Bar for the best scottish mc of the year :shifty: lol my fave tracks would be The Racist Thought, Pride and The System. :8) waitin for next tape.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 14th, '07, 19:31

thx killa :worship: :worship: yeh mart will be big time producer in bout 1-2 year, so we all got to steal his beats before he becomes a cocky motherfucker :shifty: lol j/k

n thx yoshter :worship: :worship:
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Postby bg_pop » Mar 14th, '07, 20:25

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props to sk cos i know english aint his first language so he did well there. 9/10



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Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 14th, '07, 20:31

yes mart dont forget us when you get all the cash :shifty: :flower:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Mar 14th, '07, 20:32

I listened on the bus yesterday but I'll try to relisten tonight and leave feed :D
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Mar 15th, '07, 02:16

Intro- :unsure:

Pride Ft. Asp- Sick beat from mart :worship: This track is still great after hearing it so many times. Lyrics, chorus, and flow were great...to bar and asp. And hook is catchy as hell.

The Racist Thought ft. Kez
Chorus was good. seemed a little droney to me :sweating: You're verses flowed well and lyrics fit. there was some clever rhyming in it. Kez's verse was good. I can see now how people say he curses too much but it doesn't make it bad. Some great rhyming from him. Bar's second verse lacked a little compared to 1st but was still sick. Another great beat from Mart.

House Of Commons Skit- I giggled a little haha

The Patriot- Good story. You flowed nicely on the beat. The chorus is catchy. Not much more to say :sweating:

The Things I Should Say- I don't like the overall sound but the concept is original. You flowed nicely to the beat. Sorry asp but I didn't like the beat much. Kinda hurt my ears at parts (the screeching beeps) :( Maybe if I listen again some more I'll like it more.

This Is Why- I'm, really liking this track. You have a lot of energy in this and it's great. Flow and lyrics are awesome. Yet another great beat from Mart.

This Is The Last Time-I love this beat..oh what a surprise...Mart produced it :p. I like this song a lot too. I'm feeling your flow on this. Chorus came out better than I thought it was, especially after you saying it was lacking something but didn't know what but I guess Mart is a magician. :sweating:

The System- ooooh I remember this was the beat that was hard to get a chorus to but it came out pretty good. Nicer job Dope. A little odd beat but the more I hear it, the more I like it. Flow seems a little too slow on this track though. The second verse was the best of the 3 but thee 3rd was close too.

Media- weird beginning....well flow is weird and I'm not feeling this beat at all.
but still a decent track lyric wise.

Pride Megamix-Phantom- great flow and lyrics.
SK-great verse man. Like Killa said, English isn't your 1st language and you still wrote a sick verse
Killa- great verse
2 Real-I like his voice. Reminds me of older westcoast rap. Sick flow and lyrics too.
Kez-nice verse. you had some great lines in there. I liked the fetus lines.
Overall everyone had a sick verse on htis. I also like how Mart put Asp, Me and Killa together(being we're TMW)..don't know if anyone else noticed that though

Overall:
Great EP man. I was surprised by a lot of this. You've improved tenfold since you're last release and songs. Keep it up man. I'm looking forward to doing our collab and hearing more of you're projects. I also think it is impossible for Mart to produce a bad beat...he never ceases to amaze me. :8)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 15th, '07, 02:21

^ thanx alot man :worship: :worship: appreciate it :D

and btw it was marts idea to stick TMW guys together he pointed out to me that there was 3 verses from TMW lol eas a nice touch :happy:

again thx for the review, and to evryone else who gave a review and donwloaded, first tape is around 600 dwnloads now, not to bad :D just got to make sure my next one does as good :sweating:
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Mar 15th, '07, 02:25

Bar wrote:^ thanx alot man :worship: :worship: appreciate it :D

and btw it was marts idea to stick TMW guys together he pointed out to me that there was 3 verses from TMW lol eas a nice touch :happy:

again thx for the review, and to evryone else who gave a review and donwloaded, first tape is around 600 dwnloads now, not to bad :D just got to make sure my next one does as good :sweating:

No problem on leaving feed..I enjoyed it :)
and Mart is a genius.

I'm sure you'll do just as good, if not better on your next release. People now know how good you are and you'll only improve more by next time..which will make even more people listen. Damn 600 is a lot..hopefully you'll break 1000 :8)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 15th, '07, 02:31

ThomasAguanis wrote:
Bar wrote:^ thanx alot man :worship: :worship: appreciate it :D

and btw it was marts idea to stick TMW guys together he pointed out to me that there was 3 verses from TMW lol eas a nice touch :happy:

again thx for the review, and to evryone else who gave a review and donwloaded, first tape is around 600 dwnloads now, not to bad :D just got to make sure my next one does as good :sweating:

No problem on leaving feed..I enjoyed it :)
and Mart is a genius.

I'm sure you'll do just as good, if not better on your next release. People now know how good you are and you'll only improve more by next time..which will make even more people listen. Damn 600 is a lot..hopefully you'll break 1000 :8)


to break 1000 oficially id need at least 1500 requests on hailztorm :sweating: imma frow it back around yahoo :D
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Postby mart85 » Mar 15th, '07, 03:07

thanks thomas and everybody else :happy:

oh and I make lame beats sometimes, but I just don't use them :p I probably keep like 50% of the beats I start, the other 50% are either just bad, or I just don't like them and don't feel like finishing them lol
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 15th, '07, 03:12

mart85 wrote:thanks thomas and everybody else :happy:

oh and I make lame beats sometimes, but I just don't use them :p I probably keep like 50% of the beats I start, the other 50% are either just bad, or I just don't like them and don't feel like finishing them lol


you should let me use them :shifty: they probly still better than the wide selection of dirty south beats on soundclick :(
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Postby mart85 » Mar 15th, '07, 03:23

lol I would ruin my reputation if I let someone use one of my bad beats lmao... cause since they're not so good I don't waste time trying to make them sound "professional" so they sound like ringtones beats lol
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