The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

NEW REDZEK - Face The World**********

The forum for TRshady family audio songs and albums / mixtapes.

NEW REDZEK - Face The World**********

Postby Le Tunisien » Oct 24th, '10, 01:57

(pervious feedback link:http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=99720&start=15)


check itttttt you wont be deceived :y: :y: :y:

Download:
http://www.mediafire.com/?fq9zpx5jmo89mbx
http://www.zshare.net/audio/81906726d7e4712c/


Lyrics:

[Verse1]

ayo

nobody chose the color of his skin
his family & origin,his weight to be fat or thin
please wait q!its a sin,you make the death& life a twin
when you judge somebody by somethin he never chose to
have or even look like ,its like a rollercoaster
this life,it goes up it goes down,you go nutz,like a clown
you laugh behind the tears,but its time
to forget everything..fall and get up from the ground

[Chorus]

faced all this earth
...i could have just died
faced all the world
i should have just cried

i wanna live
just one last dream and leave

[Verse 2]

i'll scream i believe,to be heard and forgived
in my deathday ,ill ask god for a gift
to send an angel to my grave,and pray for me cuz i was brave
in this life,the shit i faced could'v got my face erased
people disgrace the race,it is late for this place
to have hate bein replaced,by the love and the peace
who is above the police,when they cut you into a piece
freez!my life is too cold already to hear that
i feel bad..im just scared,i got a fear dad
what would we do when you leave us??im just still mad
that everybody gotta die,one day
do i even have to try,to stay?

[Chorus]

faced all this earth
...i could have just died
faced all the world
i should have just cried

i wanna live
just one last dream and leave

(bridge)

faced all the earth
its me who resists
faced all the world
to prove i exist

and i just dont care
if you'll get me compared

[Verse3]

sadness in my eyes but i couldnt even cry
maybe tears dried,maybe im not alive
maybe everything gone,but somehow i survived
always full of surprise,but i couldnt realise
i was a fool when i tried to keep it cool till i die
im an eagle with the people,i just aim then attack..
you should never come near me,this aint just rap
you see everything clearly,life is trap
thats a fact,when you give somethin dont get it back
cuz its wack,you know that nothin is worth a react
im sick of this world,racism in all talk
criticism when i walk..it is just your fault


[Chorus]x2

faced all this earth
...i could have just died
faced all the world
i should have just cried

i wanna live
just one last dream and leave

(bridge)

faced all the earth
its me who resists
faced all the world
to prove i exist

and i just dont care
if you'll get me compared
Last edited by Le Tunisien on Oct 24th, '10, 17:14, edited 2 times in total.
Image
User avatar
Le Tunisien
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3443
Joined: Dec 4th, '06, 21:52
Location: Everywhere
Gender: Male

Re: NEW REDZEK - Face The World**********

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 24th, '10, 10:07

what happened to your quality... went back again to shit lol. you didnt mixed how I told you to??
lol, and you added too much reverb man, sounds like your in a submarine or something hahaha. please buy a mic man or something lol :shakehead: haha :wave:

I like the flow a lot man, I see you've been working a lot on it. its good. the beat is also nice, at first I thought it would be crap but it turned out to be good....

yeah man, you are creative but that quality needs to be fixed in order to be enjoyed better :y:

SO FIX IT!!!!! lol
User avatar
B.A.D.
Dr.Dre
Dr.Dre
 
Posts: 8908
Joined: Jan 15th, '05, 20:51
Location: Germany/Mexico/Australia
Gender: Male

Re: NEW REDZEK - Face The World**********

Postby Le Tunisien » Oct 24th, '10, 13:12

@ax
yeah i did :unsure:
i just did noise reduction, the pop eq, gentle hit cut and low boost,classic softknew,the reverb u told me for verses, then limit soft -18..thats all for verses, and same thing for hooks but for reverb i use nice precesene maybe i did mistake cuz i put reverb for all the 3 layers in hook...hmm anyways i will re record it at my friend's mini studio..so it would sound better..cuz i know its good what im doin!!
thanks anyways :happy:
Image
User avatar
Le Tunisien
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3443
Joined: Dec 4th, '06, 21:52
Location: Everywhere
Gender: Male

Re: NEW REDZEK - Face The World**********

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 24th, '10, 13:26

le tunisien wrote:@ax
yeah i did :unsure:
i just did noise reduction, the pop eq, gentle hit cut and low boost,classic softknew,the reverb u told me for verses, then limit soft -18..thats all for verses, and same thing for hooks but for reverb i use nice precesene maybe i did mistake cuz i put reverb for all the 3 layers in hook...hmm anyways i will re record it at my friend's mini studio..so it would sound better..cuz i know its good what im doin!!
thanks anyways :happy:


low boost??? l dont think it fits on this track... its too bassy already. you need a microphone. recording directly to your laptop mic is not going to sound good. never
User avatar
B.A.D.
Dr.Dre
Dr.Dre
 
Posts: 8908
Joined: Jan 15th, '05, 20:51
Location: Germany/Mexico/Australia
Gender: Male

Re: NEW REDZEK - Face The World**********

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 24th, '10, 14:11

link of feedback?
Image
Image

so much WIN!
User avatar
Mr. Chambers
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1743
Joined: May 28th, '09, 02:03
Location: pittsburgh
Gender: Male

Re: NEW REDZEK - Face The World**********

Postby Le Tunisien » Oct 24th, '10, 15:08

chambers wrote:link of feedback?

errr what do you mean tom? lol just feed this ;D
Image
User avatar
Le Tunisien
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3443
Joined: Dec 4th, '06, 21:52
Location: Everywhere
Gender: Male

Re: NEW REDZEK - Face The World**********

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 24th, '10, 15:48

6) From this date (October 4th, 2010) you will need to include one link of feedback you have given to post a track/beat. Any topic made without a valid link of feedback WILL BE LOCKED until you give a link of feedback. And no "this was dope" or short feedback. Your thread will be locked if it isn't seen as satisfying feedback.
Image
Image

so much WIN!
User avatar
Mr. Chambers
Soldier
Soldier
 
Posts: 1743
Joined: May 28th, '09, 02:03
Location: pittsburgh
Gender: Male

Re: NEW REDZEK - Face The World**********

Postby Le Tunisien » Oct 24th, '10, 17:13

ah okay,uhm ill edit in first post
Image
User avatar
Le Tunisien
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3443
Joined: Dec 4th, '06, 21:52
Location: Everywhere
Gender: Male

Re: NEW REDZEK - Face The World**********

Postby gutawafang » Oct 26th, '10, 04:26

very soft. chorus not good
ADD ME ON PS4: gutawafang
Currently playing: Destiny
Image
TR Rap Battle Record: 23-8
User avatar
gutawafang
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 9474
Joined: Dec 13th, '07, 08:01
Location: Lion City
Gender: Male


Return to Audio Stage



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users

cron