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Steven - Relentless Verse (Accapella)

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Re: Steven - Relentless Verse (Accapella)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Oct 25th, '10, 19:51

:laughing: I'm not gonna lie B you sound like the long lost member of Rhyme Asylum
that was pretty dope though...especially for your 1st audio drop :smoking:
I'd love to hear another one in the future :y:
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Re: Steven - Relentless Verse (Accapella)

Postby gvdz » Oct 25th, '10, 19:51

i like it.
i only miss the beat.
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Re: Steven - Relentless Verse (Accapella)

Postby Kez » Oct 25th, '10, 20:00

Hahaha you sound proper like Killa!! Like your voice n that :p

It was alright but honestly it's hard to feed acapella, obviously you didn't put massive effort into it cause you have no flow to follow or any particular emotion or theme to the song, but for what it was it was alright. When you make an actual song with a beat i should be able offer more insight lol

Also

and word, but i dunno anything or anyone about beats, only SaJJad but hes busy doing his own thing.


Who gives a shit lol, just grab some beats off Soundclick to practice on or somethin
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Re: Steven - Relentless Verse (Accapella)

Postby dR3 » Oct 25th, '10, 20:46

Uhmmm... fuck zShare?
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Re: Steven - Relentless Verse (Accapella)

Postby Block » Oct 25th, '10, 22:07

Lol, all you damn ass english people sound the same to me. Fuck your couch.

Anyway, it's going to take you a while to get the emotion aspect down. Your flow would be better to judge if you had a beat, like other people have said. Not bad for a first attempt, dude.
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Re: Steven - Relentless Verse (Accapella)

Postby gutawafang » Oct 26th, '10, 04:26

nice. :y:
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Re: Steven - Relentless Verse (Accapella)

Postby classthe_king » Oct 27th, '10, 02:38

You sound EXACTLY like a british spyder lol
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Steven - Relentless Verse (Accapella)

Postby Solace » Oct 27th, '10, 03:57

classthe_king wrote:You sound EXACTLY like a british spyder lol

Wow that's pretty rude of you to say.
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Re: Steven - Relentless Verse (Accapella)

Postby B.A.D. » Oct 27th, '10, 05:11

damn, I never picture your voice like that. and how come you sound so clean?? you recorded in a basement or what??.... nice man lol

for a first time this is not bad at all :y: :y: but yeah, its you choice if you want to get serious or not. if u do, I'll be glad to help :y:

rtf??
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Re: Steven - Relentless Verse (Accapella)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Nov 3rd, '10, 18:53

doesn't sound based enough......

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