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Explicit - Live For This Music

Postby Tranquil » Dec 5th, '10, 14:46

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Last edited by Tranquil on Dec 18th, '10, 07:09, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Explicit - Live For This Music

Postby GibbzyTrShady » Dec 5th, '10, 14:50

fire man!! feeling the track!! you always drop some sick stuff man flow spot on and beat choice is killer!!! keep droppin man waitin on ure youtube right now aye :happy:
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Re: Explicit - Live For This Music

Postby Vettori » Dec 6th, '10, 20:18

Nice listen. i liked it, but for some reason, it sounds like your using a very minimal "telephone" effect on your voice, i think it maybe too compressed.
Not enough of the bass in your voice comes through.

i liked the song, at some points ur flow fell off, cause you tryed speeding up to fit words in. non the less i enjoyed it though..nice to see some more people recording these days :D
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Re: Explicit - Live For This Music

Postby Kez » Dec 7th, '10, 00:55

Your flow is pretty sick, although a couple times you fumbled it a bit and had to speed up to fit the words in which kinda made you say em a bit less clear. Overall though it was pretty good and kept me listenin.
Your delivery has a very clear voice which immediately caught my attention, but you sound kinda bored and don't sound particularly emotive. Work on that though and you'll be much better cause your clarity is great. Also a couple times the way you say some words sounds kinda unnatural, for example the "because i need to" the way you say the to is off lol, cause nobody would put the emphasis on the "to" and not the "need", if you get me.
I liked your lyrics too, pretty nice concept and the way some of the lines were executed was pretty nice.
Liked the hook's lyrics but your singing was pretty meh

So yeah overall track's alright
Also can you hook me up with that beat? Been wantin to get it haha
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