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An Acoustic recording, love to hear feedback

Postby Instant Legend » May 15th, '11, 21:24

I dont think many emcees are puttin together acoustic cuts, but I've got a couple under my belt from live shows and quick studio recordings. Thought I'd share a song I put together with a buddy Colin Smith. Check it out, like it, hate it - just let me know.

One take, straight through

Love, Divorce Or Shoot ME (Acoustic) Ft. Colin Smith by Instant Legend on Ubetoo - Listen to Instant Legend songs for free



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Postby Block » May 15th, '11, 23:14

I like it, bro. Your boy has a dope voice, as well. Reminds me a lot of an Intuition song.
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Postby Kez » May 15th, '11, 23:29

I've always liked the idea of accoustic rap, wanted to do it myself but I don't know anyone who can really play guitar all that well and past that it's hard as shit to record.

This was good though. I don't really know what to say it was just dope to listen to. Good shit haha
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Postby Instant Legend » May 16th, '11, 03:34

good lookin out!
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Postby Xray » May 16th, '11, 09:39

This was a good listen. I enjoyed the beat and the hook a lot. I'm guessing the guy on the hook made the beat? If so, props to him or whoever. Your verses weren't bad, they were alright.

I just felt your flow was extremely slow for the melody, and it sounds like your flowing to a drum beat in your head. Your best lines were on that little bridge you did, by far.

I didn't like the lyrics much tbh, didn't deliver for me. Your delivery also felt held-back, I don't know about you but one takes are always a bad idea. Work on flowing to melodies more.

Good song.
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Postby Instant Legend » May 16th, '11, 18:09

thanks for the input, i was just ridin the rhythm lol
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Postby Maybe » May 16th, '11, 19:08

This was perfect man. I loved the whole thing from start to finish... It's nice to hear some acoustic stuff for a change.
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Postby Instant Legend » May 17th, '11, 17:18

Just wanted to thank those who've been listening; your plays have pushed the track into the number one played song slot. Thanks fam
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Postby Mr. Chambers » May 17th, '11, 17:29

shit is sick...i loved it...holla at me when you got time to collab.
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Postby B.A.D. » May 18th, '11, 13:48

thats a nice ass site man. never seen it before.

I've been wanting to do one of this since I have memory, I dont know why I havent... hmm, mind if I steal your idea for my album bro?

loved it man, although one thing I could point out is the repetitiveness of it.. after a while it gets tiring to listen to the same damn riff lol.. maybe you can spice it up a bit. also, great hook. whoever is singing is good. I dont know if it was a problem with the site player or is there a part where there's like a speed slip. or somthing?

anyways. I feel like remixing that lol. addin some drums n shit haha
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Postby christalgurl » May 18th, '11, 18:13

That was really good. I liked the lyrics, the flow, everything. :y:
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Re: An Acoustic recording, love to hear feedback

Postby Instant Legend » May 19th, '11, 02:55

thanks - be sure to "like" it on facebook :)
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Postby Instant Legend » May 29th, '11, 17:50

wanted to reignite the interest in this - less than 300 plays, and thats not too gravy lol

gotta bring it back!
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Postby Scrubz » May 29th, '11, 17:52

shit was sick dude, wasn't sure if was going to dig it before i listened but no complaints at all. Keep doing what ur doing. Lemme know what you think about my new tracks.
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Postby Instant Legend » May 30th, '11, 23:37

i really appreciate the feedback
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