Rap Battle Swad Vs Bar

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m2YmVR_K ... r_embedded

my second ever battle, should be clearer for you all to understand this time lol.

[Tash8]

hahaha nice, watch that fool die from cancer

[B.A.D.]

lol, that was pretti cool... nice crowd there.. lol, I couldn't understand much again tbh. but seems like you had fun so...

keep doin that, its a good to way to build up respect so good job

[Trimss]

It seems cool.. But tbh i can't understand two words in a row. English isn't my first language and you and him have a hard scottish? accent. lmao but cool

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Im not sure if your parts where pre written or not but i think you lost due to the fact they definiatly seemed pre written while his didnt seem it at least. I know a few people who prewrite but actually act like it is off the top of the head and it actually makes there battles "seem" better. Is all how the audience perceives you. was sick though.

these battles are all pre written, your told be pre-write your bars, some guys do go in and freestyle but not many, and not even swad who sayed he did, he didnt freestyle all of them.

thanks for the comments guys, next one will be soon

[Xray]

Good shit man. Good effort. I don't battle but here's what I thought.

Your starting round was bad, felt like you were rhyming for the fuck of it. In diss tracks everyone does that shit, but when you're right there face to face it's pointless, unless it's a really clever punch. I didn't pick up anything quote worthy, this round killed your chance of winning imo. He was more consistent so for you to have a bad round like that it really takes a lot from your battle.

Your second round was much better, not as good as the third but better than your first. Second round was tie, third was yours but first was definitely his. I'm not sure why the judges cheated, they didn't even explain their vote, that was fucking cheating. Specially since you definitely had the third round and second was debatable, so not sure why they didn't even comment on that.

But dude...you were rapping way too fast for your lyrics to get properly examined by the crowd for them to react to it. Your delivery wasn't all that too. You sounded like you just wanted to get it over with, it didn't feel passionate, but it got much better towards the end of the battle. But trust me if you keep rapping that fast it will make it really hard for the crowd to react. The other dude won by experience tbh otherwise I can definitely see you kicking his ass judging by your third round.

@ Killa - everyone prewrites, the trick is you have to flip shit.

[Mc Cubz]

yes bar - that's big that - will get you recognition as well! Keep doing your thing! Make sure you win next time though!

[Kez]

That guy's voice at the start is hilarious lmao, putting on the American accent n shit

[Instant Legend]

its kinda tough to make out the punchlines cuz the accents are so heavy tbh

both seemed like they were pretty confident, and played the crowd well

respect, looked like a nice turnout

hollar back folks, some newer shit!

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[Nick. Y]

First of all - props for the whole event!.. now the video starts with that droll talking something about some t-shirts, like someone gives a fuck about it..that really annoyed me.. the battle - well I couldn't understand 95 % of it, cause of the strong accent, but it seemed like the first contender acted pretty natural and most of his shit was really freestyle, while Bar spat something which looked written. I don't know I might be wrong, still that's how it seemed to me