FreeDoom & Bar - Just Being Real

[Scrubz]

Doom i think you need to wrk on your flow a lil, its a bit choppy. Kinda robotic. and you do sound a bit uncomfortable. Like your quality though, much better than bars imo . Hook was cool but i couldn't really hear bars part, think it needs to be turned up. Bar had a better flow and overall delivery but the mixing of your vocals aren't very good.

All in all it was a decent track, 6/10.

[Tash8]

hey man what program do you use to record?

your voice is very clear and thats really gonna help you out, you remind me of Kez - a guy who has an accent but I can still understand what you say. Bar killed you on this song haha sorry but his flow was soo fluid. Anyways it wasn't bad, I wouldn't go that far to say your flow is choppy, but rather just some lines were.

i thought the beat could be great but there was a note that really fucked with the melody for me..

[classthe_king]

Honestly, both of you guys were solid rapping wise but what killed you both was that compared to the beat your verses were so weak, not weak as in delivery (your delivery was great) but either the mixing or the quality made it really weak. Especially Bar, wtf? I thought he had a studio now that he got signed?

So yeah, just work on the mixing and you'll be good.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

Honestly, both of you guys were solid rapping wise but what killed you both was that compared to the beat your verses were so weak, not weak as in delivery (your delivery was great) but either the mixing or the quality made it really weak. Especially Bar, wtf? I thought he had a studio now that he got signed?

So yeah, just work on the mixing and you'll be good.

nah i got studio quality for album work, this is what you would call side venture, were i still got to do it myself.

[classthe_king]

Oh well that makes sense

[Tornado]

Beat choice is my kinda shit. Tbh, i feel the quality mainly let the track down for both of you, also Bar's verse souded a little too quiet aswell. Killa, felt your verse would be better with double-ups and a bit more energy in delivery. Also some lines were abit but compared to Wuzz That, definite step up. Bar's verse was solid apart from the volume issue.

Overall not bad but quality kinda ruins the track as it's a bit too obvious. 6/10