whoa, what the fuck is up with your mixing. u need to fix that shit ASAP, sounds like a continuous fart lol. Download Adobe Audition and dance with it, its gonna save you so much trouble.
you need to work on that flow man, I like where you were going with the lyrics but they need better execution. but yeah, the most important things for you is, work on your mixing and on your flow, specially on the flow, practice a lot and try to be smooth on the beat. let the beat make you.
keep it at it
