NaughtyRottenRhymer- Kool-Aid

[StoneyLodge]

First verse i've written, since I usually freestyle my stuff. Feedback please. Might wanna turn up volume, vocals a tad low on a part.
http://soundcloud.com/naughtyrottenrhymer/kool-aid






Feedback:http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=120366&p=1710715#p1710715

[B.A.D.]

-----1.4) the feedback has to be enough to be satisfying, if the person you fed or a moderator sees that as not good enough... you have to give another link of feedback.

I'm not going to lock your topic or give you a hard time, but next time please try to elaborate more with your feedbacks man.

I listened to your song, The beat is really weird, very strange way to hit notes n shit. I think its not a good choice of beat if you are starting. You gotta fix your quality a bit, cuz I dont understand anything, your vocal is too low and very badly mixed.

I like your flow though, you remind me of this Tyler creator guy. but you gotta step it up man, make it more listenable

[StoneyLodge]

Thanks man, and im sorta a man of few words with my feedback but i'll try to add more to it next tiem around. and try and improve sound quality for my future songs.

[Solace]

Why is that your voice actually reminds me of Cage's lol. Your style does remind me of Tyler's too. You shall be known as Chris Palko the Creator. I like the beat a lot actually. I could understand your verse, but the thing isn't just the quality; you've got to put a lot of force into it. It's hard when people say "Yeah fix your delivery, and put more emotion in it". Yell-rap it, it's evident your mic can barely pick up your emotion. You've got to force that inner demon voice out and make sure you're audible. You were actually flowing pretty well and I liked some of the lyrics you wrote. Post the lyrics up too, it would help a grand amount for people trying to understand you. You definitely have a lot of potential.

Tell me, how did you mix your vocals on this? And what program are you using? I'd suggest Cool Edit Pro or Adobe Audition, both can be found for free in the download section. And what mic are you using? I use a horrible 20 dollar mic from The Source and can achieve decent quality I suppose.

[StoneyLodge]

Thanks, i'll work on putting soem lyrics up later. And i just threw this together in Audacity...lol it usually works well but guess my mic was effing up for this one, since my old one broke I had to settle with a webcam mic.

[Solace]

Definitely download Cool Edit Pro 2.1 in that case. Webcam mic? Well, I'm sure we could polish it up regardless. Gotta play with the cards you're dealt.

[StoneyLodge]

Alright, willl do.

[Phantom]

yeah man i agree with what was said above, not bad sounding. i can look past the quality tho. i use a usb microphone and some people think i have studio quality when really i just took the time to learn how to mix with adobe audition. id suggest you use it too and youll achieve results quick