Atone The Underdog- Steal The Show Freestyle

[Atone]

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i made this for the mixtape
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single ... 26633&q=hi

now, my next mixtape is going to be way different, it's gonna be more rock influanced, not much rap on it, i'm trying all different styles just to have fun with what i'm doing

[Ka0t1c]

sounds like mumblin however not too bad, decent freestyle

[mdemaz]

Not bad, but you need to use more treble in your vocal mix.
Try an equalizer before you mix them in.

[Instant Legend]

need to smooth out the flow a little bit, you rush some bars, and dont sound completely comfortable on the beat yet, the production is also a little strange. sometimes less is better in terms of effects and filters

not bad homie, keep buildin

return the favor please

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[Eedee]

Lyrics aren't too bad. Not feeling the vocal effects on it though. Beat is pretty pumping though.

Try doing something different to the vocals and it'll be good.

Have a good one!

Feed me back, please.
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