Reefer Party Remix

[classthe_king]

I'm not particularly happy with this one as I spent no more than 20 minutes on my verse but it's whatever. I'm just makin music with my friends.



1st Verse: Me obviously
2nd Verse: Mak
3rd Verse: Troy Tee

download: http://www.limelinx.com/files/bc992af38de673101fa8c6c566069733

http://www.facebook.com/SentusMusic7

http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=122254&p=1725084#p1725084

[B.A.D.]

Hmm... Weird beat choice again. Although its not bad at all... but weird lol

I liked your verse, you've been stepping up on the delivery man, but you keep having exactly the same mistake I see on ALL your verses which are the Punch Ins, they are extremely noticeable. like I always tell you, that takes much away from you I think.

But yeah, The delivery step up was your best aspect (I don't feel the need to mention that you str8 owned the other two dudes on the song, thats clear) lol. But yeah keep at it man.

The guy on the third verse had a cool flow tho... but yeah those 2 have nothing really to praise.

good job man.

[classthe_king]

What punch ins could you hear? I made the last one stand out on purpose and didn't try to cover it up but I didn't think you could notice any of the other ones.

[B.A.D.]

Well, tbh you shouldn't use at all... Idk, In my opinion I think part of rapping a verse is being able to rap it all. (unless some effects require to) but well, I'll tell you the one I did notice that even sounded bad. at 1:12. listen and see.
and the one at the end, but yeah... thats ok I guess

[classthe_king]

The one at 1:12 was the one at the end lol

So you only noticed one which I made noticeable on purpose

[B.A.D.]

The one at 1:12 was the one at the end lol

So you only noticed one which I made noticeable on purpose

I thougth the one at the end was litteraly on the end, when you smooth the flow down... I'm talking about to 2 different ones. But if the 1:12 was on purpose, then its not good, cuz it doesn't sound like on purpose at all... like I said, sounds bad.

but meh, just my 2 cents.

[EyeSpick]

I didn't listen to the other guys. You delivery was solid and the flow was consistent but I felt like it was written to the beat a little sloppy. The amount of syllables in each line could have been tweaked a bit more to perfection. For 20 minute shit it was nice.

[RainMan44]

Hmm, I never would have expected you to hop on this beat, but hey....you did your thing. Your voice is pretty good, it's not just barely listenable, it's actually enjoyable. I liked the delivery, and the flow. The multies were nice as always. Good track bro


Mind feeding mine?


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