Nefarious- To Shy To Speak

[Nefarious]

Tell Me What You Think.

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Lyrics

Verse 1

Inside of me is screaming when i seem to be calm.
So if you think that you could be me, your wrong.
I give a reason to the beat of the song.
And everything that i believe in is gone.
But i was easily strong, and i proceed to be.
Headed to what i need to see, forgetting what ive equally caused.
Im a beast behind bars, and i feast on a carcuss.
You could never put me, on a leash or a harness.
And I am what i should be, a demon an artist.
You could never understand how freezing my heart is.
Im leaving the farthest that i can a path that no man.
Can track, and i was never going back never plan to crack.
If i was stranded fast with an abandoned past.
Then we would really see which one of us was standing last.
It would be i, and im telling you why, I never die.
I will fly bringing hell in the sky, and set fire.

Chorus

I, dont, see, the light, no longer.
It just, wont shine, for me.
Tell me why.
I feel un like all others.
Im just to shy to speak.

Verse 2

Im the kind of entity, relentless on my enemys.
The remedy for me is to repent whatever necessary.
Im forever barried in a scary cemetary.
Nefarious is aware that he's barely a threat but very.
Hilarious in his area's, carrying his embarasement.
Well and if he was scared of us, he wouldnt say the various.
Shit that he says to you and know you could never bare the rush.
I rip it out and you wouldnt have any fucking hair to brush.
Im here to push you people into traffic and run.
The only person who was laughing is dumb.
Im never packin a gun, cuz i could give you.
One smack and your done, and you'll be biting.
On the back or your tongue, im like phsyco with a task.
Fuck a rifle and a mask, or a knife i never ask.
You polite im gonna grab, everything i see in sight.
And i really never knew if i was ever being right.
I was seeking what i needed for me to be free to write.

Verse 3

Im gonna rap, dont tell me that i cant.
Or i will, and i'll make sure that i made it count.
Im a lyrical brain storm a hurricane miracle.
Rain swords, a cerial killer with eight arms.
And im making you pace, the hall way, with a face of anger.
When i walk by, i dont feel a trace of danger.
Your a basic stranger, I'll erase your hate.
And be the only one who ever didnt make you wait.
If you trust in me, you wouldnt lose your life.
If you would calm down but you always choose to fight.
Like there was never something better you could do tonight.
I want to prove what is wrong, isnt new to write.
And i already knew that it was what i shouldnt attempt.
Because it wasnt even good in a sense.
I knew that i could never even put in a cent.
So i was never saying something that i wouldnt have meant.

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[Scrubz]

The flow is pretty good but the only thing is there are no pauses, so doing it all in one take seems impossible. I can hear most of the punch ins as well. Your a great writer tho thats for sure. Hook needs work. not a bad track tho.

[Nefarious]

Bump.

[Ticalrecords]

yo man i loved the hook. the flow was great as usual, the only constructive criticism i can give is you may need to start giving more emotion in your verses, so i guess you need to work on that delivery. its already real good, but you gotta give it ur all to really get the song to pop yk

[Mr. Chambers]

this was prolly one of my favorite songs from you. the flow in the first verse is clutch. and the lyrics were pretty deep. i honestly didn't think the hook was very good. you can usually make a decent-good hook but this one was lacking compared to your past work i've heard. but like someone said i can hear all your punch in's....you really need to work on making them less subtle when you're mixing. pretty good overall tho

[Nefarious]

Thankyou both, very appreciated.

[Tranquil]

Your a great songwritter man! Flow, Delivery, Lyrics everything was on point man! Great song

[Nefarious]

Thanks again to everyone who listened and commented.