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[Atone]

[SG.]

Who did the hook on this? Because it is fucktasticly awful.

OK, so your lyrics seemed fine, but I'm not focusing on them in this feed. The effects you put on your voice were unnecessary and honestly quite jarring. You're also breathing quite heavily into the mic which makes you sound amateur. However, I am happy that you're on-beat, you seem to be improving. Just don't put those effects on again, it ruined the song for me.

[Atone]

[Strictt Ame]

Might I suggest some "Kill The Mic Rumble"..it kinda sounds like you got the mic right infront of you mouth..honestly I didnt think the hook was that bad, its was unique..flow was shakey a bit at times..not your best stuff, but keep it up

[Instant Legend]

i'm not big on the vocal effect here, but i really dig the vibe of this joint. It's fun, easy to listen to type of shit, and sometimes thats what really hits the spot.

good work homie - ditch those vocal effects and take it to another level!

BTW, check my thread about getting ahold of some albums

[Spyder]

the quality kinda makes it hard too understand any lyrics so. whole thing seemed a little loud to me
i mean i see improvement but not to where you should be after this long

but i dont mind the hook really, with some quality you might be ok in the near future