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[Atone]

I won't be posting my music on here anymore, just writtens

[Eedee]

First of all, the vocal quality (as usual) was terrible. Get a better mic - you're practically non-listenable. Secondly, the fuck was the 'singing'? You sounded like you were on the toilet just talking to yourself trying to pinch a loaf. It was embarrassing to listen to.

Above all, get a better microphone. I know this wasn't rap, but your rap lyrics, for the most part, are great. You just need to have better vocal quality and being able to stay on the beat.