B.A.D. - One For The Champs

[B.A.D.]

Hey, havent released anything in a while, so here you go, hope you like it.

COVER:


TITLE: One For The Champs
ARTIST: Big Ax-D
PRODUCED BY: Big Ax-D
LINK:
http://soundcloud.com/new-millenium-dre ... the-champs

Any feedback, positive or negative is always welcomed!!, I do need feedback, I want to spot my mistakes and work on them

LYRICS:
(Verse 1)
I'm just a man with a pen and a pad and pattern to follow
apart of this sorrow I pop pills and girls call me poppa
I guess I make pop for the masses, impostor with passes
to crash on this bashes and party all night
poppin my collar, like cockyness's right
something bout hip hop, people never seem to get the street thought
stopping this might is impossible mate
I'm not hight but I'm fly like I'm tucked in a kite
writing like I'm so nice but I don't even like it
shuve it up your butt, if you fucked with the mic
I make hop fors the hips so fuck em, Properly get the fuck out,
don't even knock here, I'll go all out
I'm sorry girl, I'm so dirty, blast me, (shake that ass, Get Nasty)
I jizz on my pants when I dance with your ass
I'm teasing you, lastly I'll get fuzzy, you like it?
I'll decorate the bed with guns & roses
and ask Slash to make you flash me tonight... heh
I'm think I'm loosin it baby, I'm so confused oh lady
why do you think I'm crazy

(Hook)
And its just like this
I gotta write shit and hanlde my biz
I'll make one for the champs
and the skanks
and the plankers
and them fancy dancers
and bitches & Gentleman
and girls... and ladies.... specially the one on that red mercedez
and chevys.... I'm just a man writing sentences for the haters

(Verse 2)
um, check this out, now I'm cashing my sorrows,
lashing out, to surprisingly follow
a flashing light, to the stash that I know its
only right, for me to get on and
splash this white cuz, my exitement
is oh so fasinating,
Watch me looking at the muthafucking mirror just before I get into the masturbating
my future is independence, sick and insane and famous
took me an age to get this, but I can say I made it
trick is to play the game just like is a gain to say that
singing my name like I'm afraid to forget it mayn
I do it so that you can feel the loose when fightin
I mix on the computer and the product so nice
I'm the superman of rap, clap clap when u hear that
applaud that voice on the mic, then you can fear a
mexican with a new kind a gun, a new kind of drug
a new kind of corruption..... An animal!!
Its just a part of my life that I incorporate
as a part of this rap for you to celebrate it
and you might think that I'm not ok,
well I'm geniuinly crazy

(Hook)x2
And its just like this
I gotta write shit and hanlde my biz
I'll make one for the champs
and the skanks
and the plankers
and them fancy dancers
and bitches & Gentleman
and girls... and ladies.... specially the one on that red mercedez
and chevys.... I'm just a man writing sentences for the haters

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[Ticalrecords]

your flow from 1:30 to about 1:45 was FIREEEEE!!! like i was bopping my head to it like daaaaaayummmmm haha. that was really cool. i liked the hook but i think it might be better if you made it stand out from the verses right now it all blends together, not really a bad thing but if theres one thing to be improved it be that. lyrics were nice flow was tight and delivery was on point, so cool man good stuff.

mind returning the favor?

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[Le Tunisien]

flow is fire and i like delivery here and there was soundin cool... wished you did a real hook like you know how to do it know what i mean? good shit keep it up AX

[TripleNineThree]

Beat - I enjoyed the beat, expecially the way that it started out. It was simple but it worked well - 8.5/10

Flow - Wow! Your flow fit this beat basically perfectly, you had my head bobbin! - 9.5/10

Quality - Really good! You're great at mixing your songs, they sound very professional. I couldn't knock anything quality wise - 9.5/10

Lyrics - The lyrics were also really good. This also goes with your flow because you wrote them in a perfect way that made all the lines flow together and sound smooth which was great! - 9/10

Overall - 9/10 - This was a great track man keep it up!

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[IMug4Nugz]

I like your flow on the beat, & the beat itself. Lyrics were also real good. Good job.

[Scrubz]

Good shit man! Loved the hook.

[B.A.D.]

@tical.- thanks bro, I appreciate it,

@tuna.- real hook? lol... thanks a lot for listening man, right now I'm practising more rapped hooks instead of my usual singing, thanks anyway man

@TNT.- haha thanks a lot man, I really appreciate that, I'll rtf soon

@Imug4.- thanks my brotha

@Scrubz.- thanks playa

@Geno.- hahaha well, I guess I'm very thankful for that man, I appreciate it. I posted the lyrics. thanks again for listening.

thanks to all who listened

A new Track featuring KEZ will be up soon

[Joel Venom]

i honestly thought the flow was on point and the bars were proper but as far as the hook and the bridges they threw me off pretty much and took my enjoyment from the song. i think it was too dark? if that makes any sense? but hey you did a good job with it son! keep it up!

[Trimss]

Holy shit, that flow is definitely on point. This track is really enjoyable man. Can't wait for your next track with Kez!

[voice23]

Man I was feeling this..

[SajN]

This part:

my future is independence, sick and insane and famous
took me an age to get this, but I can say I made it
trick is to play the game just like is a gain to say that
singing my name like I'm afraid to forget it mayn

was soooooo good flow-wise, and thus making the rhyme sound great too. Nice dude

Other than that the track was nice, but when the hook came in, it didn't really feel like a hook. It was just a minor difference from the first verse (and second too), so it just felt like a part of the verse.

[B.A.D.]

good looking homeys, I'm glad ya'll liked it. as for the hook, it was meant to not be as distinguishable or different from the verse, wanted to keep just one vibe going on this track. but thanks for commenting!

the track with kez will probably be up next week

[Cookzee]

hey man, im unfamiliar with you work but i have to say that after hearing this track, you're actually incredible! some parts of the flow on the track were good, but other points like after 1:30 for example were intense and had me zoning the fuck out! keep up the good work man, i look forward to whatever else you bring

[Tranquil]

I've been away for a bit, but I'm back now! So, this song! The beat is near perfect, I love the piano's and the hi-hats sound great! Your flow throughout the song is perfect on point, but in my opinion your flow on the 2nd verse was flawless, i was defiantly bobbing my head to the 2nd verse! Theres nothing much more I can say about this song man, its great!!
I've been working on some beats and songs and shit lately, i've got a song that I reckon you would shred so if your down I'll pm it to you!

[BumShiv]

Your flow is incredibly good on this. Like wow. The quality is pro like and your vocal mixing is great. The beat fits the song very well too. The ONLY flaw if I had to pick one out is that some lines in the first verse didn't seem to go with the theme of the song. But that's me just nitpicking it. Great stuff tho.
Mind returning feed? even if it's only on 1 beat haha
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