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Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Solace » Jul 20th, '12, 17:16

No, this wasn't off the top. A quick verse that will begin weekly verses or whatever...

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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Trimss » Jul 20th, '12, 22:11

That new microphone quality right? The first two bars were dope. Actually smiled while hearing them.
The beat is pretty chill, I really can't wait to hear more of you. No Homo but you're my favorite rapper on TR.

It's like this and like that and like this.. :y:
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Solace » Jul 21st, '12, 03:49

Yes, but I used a lot of layers so it was pretty sloppy. Thanks, I have no idea why I would be yours but thanks lmfao. :D
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby TripleNineThree » Jul 22nd, '12, 22:36

I enjoyed the beat. I liked the laid back and simple feel of it, definitely perfectly for a freestyle type song. Lol @ the first couple of lines. Your lyrics were really good in this and your flow had me bobbin' my head - there isn't too much I can pick apart on this track. It's pretty solid and I enjoy it.

You mentioned that you used a lot of layers and I noticed it; I think the layering you did took the quality from being good to just being alright. I would either cut the layers out or just double up on the last parts of lines and not the entire track.

Overall, this was a good little track, keep it up man! :y:

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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Solace » Jul 23rd, '12, 00:24

Thank you so much, and definitely I will return it. I'll definitely have a more natural mixing next drop. Also, congratulations on becoming the Audio Stage mod.
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby TripleNineThree » Jul 23rd, '12, 00:29

Solace wrote:Thank you so much, and definitely I will return it. I'll definitely have a more natural mixing next drop. Also, congratulations on becoming the Audio Stage mod.


Thanks man! :y:
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Nick. Y » Jul 25th, '12, 18:07

not a bad flow, coulda made it more intense i guess.. but the beat was deep, i dig it!
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Robbie G » Jul 27th, '12, 17:31

Damn...I can't say enough about how much you've improved. No of fence, but when you first started I thought you were terrible. You remind me a lot of Spoonful.

Looking forward to a full tape from you.
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Solace » Jul 28th, '12, 17:53

Thanks you two. @Robbie, dunno how this one sounds like Spoonfull, but I do have other songs where I did try his style and it turned out pretty well. Thanks, I know I was terrible lololol. Still got those songs, even my battle with you ;)
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Trimss » Jul 28th, '12, 17:56

Solace wrote:Thanks you two. @Robbie, dunno how this one sounds like Spoonfull, but I do have other songs where I did try his style and it turned out pretty well. Thanks, I know I was terrible lololol. Still got those songs, even my battle with you ;)


Oh shit! I want to hear your first song haha.
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Robbie G » Jul 29th, '12, 16:42

Solace wrote:Thanks you two. @Robbie, dunno how this one sounds like Spoonfull, but I do have other songs where I did try his style and it turned out pretty well. Thanks, I know I was terrible lololol. Still got those songs, even my battle with you ;)


I was talking about the part were you're like "it's like this and like that and like this and uhhh" Because he did the same thing on a couple songs haha. I didn't mean it as a negative thing though.


and god hahaa Didn't we You, Chet, Xray and I all battle? Good times.
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Solace » Jul 29th, '12, 20:28

Robbie G wrote: didn't mean it as a negative thing though.

I took it as a compliment. :y:

Robbie G wrote:and god hahaa Didn't we You, Chet, Xray and I all battle? Good times.

We coulda started our own elite battling league. :smoking:
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Phantom » Jul 30th, '12, 00:22

man you have gotten better. good flow as usual. your surprised somebody said your their favorite? my advice is dont be. your true to who you are, and it shows through your music. keep it coming solace, were listening.
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '12, 15:32

Thank you Phantom, that means a lot :y:
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Re: Freestyle Friday #1

Postby gutawafang » Aug 11th, '12, 15:36

I love the multis. Simple but it all fits together and flows well. I like your flow man. Maybe do a 90 bar next friday. hahahahahaha good job :y:
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