Check out this contest entry of mine

[Dlovetv]

Feedback:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=147228#p1960600
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=147535#p1961642
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=147393#p1960569
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Youtube:

http://youtu.be/9M3z2QYebtk

The beat was provided by the contest host, rules were just spit 32 bars..

Any feedback appreciated

[Eedee]

Wow, that was actually pretty good.

I'd say make your vocals more deep. Add another layer with some reverb and turn it down a little and it'll sound more full.

Lyrics were nice, some multis in there, so I heard (no lyrics in front of me to read and make 'em out).

That beat was interesting. Your flow was great at times, at other times you seemed to rush like the first bar, for example.

But yeah. Good stuff, keep dropping some sick songs!

[Dlovetv]

Thanks man I appreciate it. I agree about the voice thing. It was bugging me because all of my other tracks I sound deeper

[Dlovetv]

any more feedback?

[Blu]

Will feed after I'm done eating.