it's not bad... I like the fact that you tried to do something different for the drum pattern, but I don't think it's on point yet.... well I wasn't really feeling it... I think you'd need to have something (maybe a kick) on a regular basis, like every 1/4 of a bar or every 1/2 of a bar, something to make people follow the rhythm
I think if you do that, it will improve your drum pattern, and it will still sound original, and you may have a great, unique beat

keep it up