Bar - Preview

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called preview coz thats all it is, its about 50 seconds

http://www.zshare.net/audio/bar-preview-mp3.html

http://www.sendspace.com/file/5khf4w

im tryna go completely lyrical constantly, i am goin to make a full track like this on this beat but i need to practice alot more before i do i nearly died tryn spit it

low qlty coming in a second

Low qlty:-

http://www.zshare.net/audio/bar-preview ... y-mp3.html

http://www.sendspace.com/file/v1rb5z


Lyrics:-

spit low hit mo' shit go hypno
tise you rise through skies to
skies blue who knew no flow
lets go jets blow for sure
a lure a cure the poor
you saw the raw a spit ma mc shit
this be just me so free flow nice
intise the rise of chirst
in chirst i bless no less no mess
sub-quest you guessed get rich
get bitch never hitch
forever spit always hit
never care take a dare always stare
then drain the brian last grain
no mayn
typical lyrical spritual miracle
hip hop sleeping a keep shit hot beeping
creeping full sweaping leaping over the weaping
i take the game n lock it for safekeeping oh
blow the door fo sure
no more

just incase

[sinemm]

u sound cool..

if the one breathing was u it'd be better tho
cool track..

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u sound cool..

if the one breathing was u it'd be better tho
cool track..

horny mutha fucka

thx

[sinemm]

u sound cool..

if the one breathing was u it'd be better tho
cool track..

horny mutha fucka

thx

lmao me? the one horny mothafocka is YoUu..
lol anyway

[DOPE]

heard the low q one,,, good thing you guys startin uppin on low q, im able to listen to this stuff now


good lyrics, nice flow

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heard the low q one,,, good thing you guys startin uppin on low q, im able to listen to this stuff now


good lyrics, nice flow

thx man apreciate it

and yeh well i know of sarah RS and cgame, on dial up and it only take a quote 30 seconds to upload the low qlty one

[DOPE]

me too,

got dial up

[$0 R3@L]

gotta be perfectly honest....its another track where the multis really make no sense as a sentence .Flow is ok and production wasnt ALL bad. My own beef wit the beat is that is used quiet alot....coccoa just used it and ive heard plenty others too...try find beats no used so much to make your track stand outta the crowd more.

not bad attempt though for practice.

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^ yeh just trying new shit


thx for checkin

[die2nite]

Read the lyrics and it sounds like you just took a rhyme book and started slapping words together. You need to put some thought into it and give it all a central theme.

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Read the lyrics and it sounds like you just took a rhyme book and started slapping words together. You need to put some thought into it and give it all a central theme.

a ryhme book, what the fuck you implying

[$0 R3@L]

Read the lyrics and it sounds like you just took a rhyme book and started slapping words together. You need to put some thought into it and give it all a central theme.

a ryhme book, what the fuck you implying

his saying that it seems as if you just get random rhyming words and throw them together....

[die2nite]

Read the lyrics and it sounds like you just took a rhyme book and started slapping words together. You need to put some thought into it and give it all a central theme.

a ryhme book, what the fuck you implying

his saying that it seems as if you just get random rhyming words and throw them together....

Yea pretty much what I'm saying.

[DjSnax]

kinda sounds like you used a regular computer mic....

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kinda sounds like you used a regular computer mic....

well you obviously didnt listen