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Preview - What A Life (ft. and Mixed by Bar)

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Preview - What A Life (ft. and Mixed by Bar)

Postby Kez » Feb 14th, '07, 03:42

Preview for the new tape, thought i'd put a preview. Aint posted here for a while, been working on it, so i thought i'd post.

Would appreciate feed on this track as i've been working my ass off trying to make this tape better than my old stuff, so if it's the same then at least i'll know.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/07-kez-ft-b ... i-mp3.html
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 14th, '07, 03:43

mixed by bar****** lol


im doing a akon job on this one, got to help a freind when hey need it right :sweating: todl yall id go for 3 times singin :shifty: is it 3 times lucky ?
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Postby mart85 » Feb 14th, '07, 04:37

that's a nice track really... I liked it, flow and delivery was nice... interesting preview for the tape :8)

and bar, your hook isn't bad but it's kinda hard to hear lol... I think it should be louder :sweating:

but good job on this both of you, I liked the song
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 14th, '07, 04:40

mart85 wrote:that's a nice track really... I liked it, flow and delivery was nice... interesting preview for the tape :8)

and bar, your hook isn't bad but it's kinda hard to hear lol... I think it should be louder :sweating:

but good job on this both of you, I liked the song


dar i say i was scard to make it prominit :sweating:

thx for checkin man :worship:
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Postby Kez » Feb 14th, '07, 15:22

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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 14th, '07, 19:39

was pretty decent....erm bar was a lil lazy on way he delieverd the hook...like i told him it coulda worked better if it was mixed a lil better with pan and stuff...kez your parts were ok i just think you need to work on delievery cause sometimes ya flow goes off mark.

Overall not bad man

6/10
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Postby AspirinE » Feb 15th, '07, 11:42

I would give it an 8/10 ... for Kez's verse, i like his delivery.

Bars hook is a bit lazy, needs more emotion and diction.
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