Get Real, DQ SOLO

[DelinQuent]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInf ... ID=5043844
new song, recorded yesterday.
personally, i don't even like the hook, but i can't write hooks for shit.
goes on a bunch of different topics.
give a listen, and give some feedback please.

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all the verses are pretty good man, chorus is pretty bad but you said so yourself, anywae verses were good, nice work man

[DelinQuent]

yes, i need to work on choruses lmao. i appreciate the honesty. just lets me know what to work on for the next track.
thanks for the feed.

[$0 R3@L]

hook is not good man....the varying topics didnt work for me should of maybe stuck to one in particlar cause i think a song only works when the listener comes outta playing the track knowing what you was gettin at.

Personally i didnt.

beat was dope,and sum lines were dope man.

[DelinQuent]

thanks for the feed. i agree with the oine subject thing, this is what happens when you don't sit down and write, and you write the song over the course of months lol.
good lookin on the feed tho