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SK - Nightmare [Produced By SK][Mixed By Mart]

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SK - Nightmare [Produced By SK][Mixed By Mart]

Postby bg_pop » Feb 26th, '07, 18:38

Ok
Here it is my first attempt at writing a song in English and that I know it's not my best song but I want Your opinion on it!
Me and MArt decide to make this song just to see how I rap on English,You all know I am from Bulgaria and it's really hard especially for me to write lyrics on english so I will appraise your valuation :)
The lyrics are not perfect!But I want you opinion for the beat ,too
10x a lot :worship: :worship: :worship:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/pewedz
http://www.zshare.net/audio/sk-nightmare-mp3.html
10x :)
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Postby mart85 » Feb 26th, '07, 20:45

I think you should put it on zshare... people prefer zshare here :happy:

edit: you already know what I think of it, but I'll write it anyway... it's a cool concept for the song, and you know I love that guitar in the beat lol... the only problem is that English isn't your first language and it shows in this song... I understand what you're talking about cause you explained it to me, but for other people, maybe it won't be too clear... if it wasn't for that, it would be awesome :worship:
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Postby bg_pop » Feb 26th, '07, 20:59

Yeah I know :) 10x again :):):)
I am sorry too for the english but.... this is it :)
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Postby mart85 » Feb 26th, '07, 21:10

yeah don't worry about that :happy: it's a nice attempt... and I know how good you are in Bulgarian (even if I don't understand it lol) :worship:

EDIT : zshare link:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/sk-nightmare-mp3.html

SK, you should edit your first message, and add this link :happy:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 26th, '07, 21:29

for it not being your firstlaungage its pretty good man :worship: i mean you still got good flow, you got nice ryhmes..i understand it all, i like te style of the beat and nice mixing :D

you should keep practicing english spitting...it would open up alot more doors :D

if you want more practice i could use you on a megamix of my pride track :whistle: if you wanne :sweating:
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Postby bg_pop » Feb 26th, '07, 21:46

Bar wrote:for it not being your firstlaungage its pretty good man :worship: i mean you still got good flow, you got nice ryhmes..i understand it all, i like te style of the beat and nice mixing :D

you should keep practicing english spitting...it would open up alot more doors :D

if you want more practice i could use you on a megamix of my pride track :whistle: if you wanne :sweating:

10x
and whattttttt
:confusion: :confusion: :confusion:
On that great track pride ?
You want me ?To be part of this great song ??
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Postby $0 R3@L » Feb 26th, '07, 23:13

yer man considerin this aint your first language its proper dope....you sound better then sum rappers i hear and they are english :whistle: so well done man....great stuff man.But dont change your roots to fit our needs,still rep your country cause i respect that man your a great talent :)
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Postby bg_pop » Feb 27th, '07, 14:15

$0 R3@L wrote:yer man considerin this aint your first language its proper dope....you sound better then sum rappers i hear and they are english :whistle: so well done man....great stuff man.But dont change your roots to fit our needs,still rep your country cause i respect that man your a great talent :)

10x man
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