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UWC & Mart85 Productions Present: Bar - Fuck The System

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 8th, '07, 21:27

UWC & Mart85 Productions Present: Bar - Fuck The System EP

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High Qlty - http://www.hailztorm.com/U.W.C/Fuck_The ... em_EP_.zip

Low Qlty - http://www.hailztorm.com/U.W.C/Fuck_The ... w_qlty.zip

Thanks to - Cgame for letting me use server, Steve n Tom for helping make good qlty Low qlty lol, Dope, ASP, IL rounce, RTK for Giving me Beats, ASP, Kez, SK, Thomas Aguanis for Featuring/helping me out with vocals lol N everyone that listened to the single n helped inspire me to make this happen

Very BIG Special ( no homo ) thanks to - Mart85, Hot beats witch everyone will agree Really hot mixing great Support and advice, couldnt Have done this without him, and as much as its my EP he put a hell of a lot of work into this, so thanks alot man

Lastly....Everyone Enjoy


Edit:


I finally got My EP On Datpiff

http://www.datpiff.com/Bar-Mart85-Fuck- ... d3096.html

please rate it what you think :happy:



Edit Number 2

ok well Just a Update On The Amount of downloads The EP has Gotten So far, now on Thursday i Will Try make an Official Official Number of Downloads Althought it Will Be impossible to get it Spot on But My Estimate Wont be To Much Out

As Of Yesterday It Had 780 requests to Be downloaded, now thats only Means 780 clicks, the same way zshare works, so to be on The safe side coz i know a couple of People had trouble downloading and had to re-start maybe 3 times, and Taking Away others ect On a Safe side your Saying Thats At Least:-

400 downloads From Hailztorm

Although Cgame Did say to me it could be more like 500+ coz he had stats for the amount of GB tranfsered ect

On Soundlick As of the Past 3 days I been getting 30+ plays a day on Tracks OBV not all but the best tracks are getting a good 10-20 plays a day, and usually the same amount of Downloads, so thats pretty good aswell

Myspace sucks roflmao

and Datpiff have 11 downloads and 63 Listens

So not to bad id say :sweating: althought im not fully happy with it, but just makes me want the next one to be alot better

thx to everyone that downloaded and Listened :worship:
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Postby Kez » Mar 8th, '07, 21:30

Finally, it drops! :whistle:
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Postby D@vid » Mar 8th, '07, 21:32

it has finally happened. i'll dl just for pride
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 8th, '07, 21:33

bestestever202005 wrote:it has finally happened. i'll dl just for pride


the megamix of pride is dope as fuck the guys pulled through with ver good verses

the rest of it aint to bad either lol
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Postby mart85 » Mar 8th, '07, 22:30

lol yeah, if you liked Pride, you'll most likely like the other songs :whistle:

thanks for the "special thanks" (no homo) lol... it was fun working on it and I can say that all these tracks are much better than what you did before, you've improved a lot, so keep on practising and you'll always improve :8) that's one of the most important thing to do if you wanna become better: to listen to people's advices and be aware of what you have to improve and then work on that :happy:

so yeah, everybody please take a listen and leave some feedback :8)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 8th, '07, 23:44

Angie wrote:uve improved since i first heard u A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :sweating: :p i love the one with asp :p im not done listen

are u one of those ppl who is all paranoid n shit... seams like it lol :D

*keeps listenn*


paranoid :confusion: no dont thinkso.... :sweating: what makes you think that :sweating:

n thanx :D
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 8th, '07, 23:58

Angie wrote:
Bar wrote:
Angie wrote:uve improved since i first heard u A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :sweating: :p i love the one with asp :p im not done listen

are u one of those ppl who is all paranoid n shit... seams like it lol :D

*keeps listenn*


paranoid :confusion: no dont thinkso.... :sweating: what makes you think that :sweating:

n thanx :D


how ur like the system is corupt yo blah blah :p rofl!!! :D



:shifty: it is :happy:
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Postby Kez » Mar 9th, '07, 00:32

Here's your review fucker :flower:

Intro:
Good introduction, only problem i could find is at times it sounds a bit like, forced. But good overall.

Pride (ft. ASP)
Honestly, no joke, i have been humming this song in my head for like a week. Beat's hot, props to Mart (he made it didn't he?). Bar your verses have mad flow, not too many multies but that's your style and it shows.
ASP your verse is great, you sound real good on the beat. Same as Bar.
Fuckin 10/10.

Racists' Thought (ft. MEEEEEE)
Hook's dead catchy. Verses have great flow, especially that "or was i meant, to fail, or was i meant, for jail" bit. Aint gonna feed on my own bit, that's just sad.

House Of Commons (Skit):
I love your house of commons member voice impression :laughing:
You got the effect of how it sounds in there down to a tee.
Lol at the Jamie Oliver thing.
Like the social commentary in this.

The Patriot:
Again hot beat. Real hot flow and lyrics, as usual. Hook's not the best on here, but still good.

The Words I Should Say:
Hot like the others.

This Is Why:
Loving the hook, just love how it is, blends perfect with the beat, which is great. Perfect.

The Last Time (ft. ThomasAguanis)
Beat's not one of the best on here, in my opinion.
Once again, you have crazy flow and lyrics.
And i love the additional vocals by Thomas

The System:
Once again, hot.

Overall:
This is the best stuff you have ever done, and one of the best tapes i have heard on here. I hope you're proud of yourself, cause i'm fuckin jealous of you now :shifty:
No seriously it's real good, i feel fully justified in giving it 10/10.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 9th, '07, 00:38

yay i got my review form you :smoking:

lol thanx man :worship: :worship:
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Postby Restlesswon » Mar 9th, '07, 00:53

full review from me soon
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Postby Inches » Mar 9th, '07, 01:08

onceim un grounded im dl/in

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Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 9th, '07, 01:11

full review soon
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 9th, '07, 01:12

@RS, cant wait thanx man :worship:

@inches, kool thanx man :worship:

@ so real, cant wait thanx man :worship:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 9th, '07, 02:29

01 - intro - (produced by R.T.K)

erm not much to say bout this...it was standard for a skit.Didnt really introduce us to the tape
or its content very well...plus at the end it sounds as though he robs your drink or summit lmao
anyway not bad but thought the intro to the tape would of been a lil stronger and deeper.

beat: n/a
content: 3/10

02 - Bar Ft. ASP - Pride (Produced by Mart85)

good start to begin with.Bar your parts are well done,great flow,lyrics content and delievery.
Asp i must admit though stole this track,i just feel in love with his content,lyrics and
flow of his input (no homo)....but seriosly great work asp.Hook is strong and on point.

beat: 8/10
content: 9/10

03 - Bar Ft. Kez -The Racist Thought - ( Produced by Mart85)

good follow up to pride,hit the listner and grab there attention.bar your parts again are all
on point didnt slip or shit very good.Kez i dunno what it is i just cant feel your stuff.Whether
its your flow or just style of rapping.You seem to over dramatise your delieverya lil i dunno
Well your lyrics are ok and flow is ok but u slipped a couple of times.the hook production
makes the hook very catchy indeed.

beat: 8/10
content: 7/10

04 - House Of Common (skit)

you slipped up many times during this skit,dunno whether you was just too lazy to re-record
but you shoudl have.It sounds to 'read' and not 'live' to work as a skit.concept is fairly nice but
coulda been done alot nicer.

beat: n/a
content: 1/10

05 - Bar - The Patriot - (Produced By IL-Rounce)

the hook on this was ok but not catchy.The stuttering part like 'bar-bar-bar' became annoying
and sounded kinda funny lmao had the production of it been done a lil better maybe would of
worked.Lyrical content was ok and delievery was ok.

beat: 5/10
content: 6/10

06 - Bar - The Words I Should Say(Produced By ASP)

the hook on this was bad...just didnt catch ya attention and make you remember the track.
The lyrical content was okish but very average.The flow was decent.Your deleivery and flow
didnt really work for this old school style beat.woulda preferd a slower/deeper track to fit
your content.

beat: 6/10
content: 5/10

07 - Bar - This Is Why [Add. Vocals by SK] (Produced By Mart85)

Sk made the hook on this his added vocals work pretty well.Lyrical content was fairly good.
Good flow and delievery here.Lyrical content was fairly good here.The mart production made
your verses work.

beat: 7/10
content: 6/10

08 - Bar - The Last Time [Add. Vocals By Thomas Aguanis] (Produced By Mart85)

hook on this works,tom's added vocals make it sound alot better and catchier.The
production of your acapellas on here is very nice.Lyric content was nice and
on point.

beat: 8/10
content: 7/10

09 - Bar - The System (Produced By Dope)

this track is nothing but terrible lmao....the flow was well well off...the lyric content was ok.
erm the beat was wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy to slow its such a shame to close the e.p
on a track like this.One thing i did like was the effects dope sued on the hook...gave it a
deep and dark feel.

beat: 1/10
content: 3/10

Overall its a very good tape...mart's production helped your stuff work very well.Its got some tracks i wouldnt play more then once but some that shall be played again for sure.Great work overall....roll on a mixtape.
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Postby B.A.D. » Mar 9th, '07, 04:13

FULL REVIEW

1.Intro
hahaha, cool intro 10/10

2.Pride
The hook is nice, good catchy shit... the first verse blows off real nice on here, ASP verse sounds good, kinda electronic mixin haha, but nice shit... loved the beat
9/10

3.The Racist Though
One of the most amazin beats I've heard in my whole fuckin life maan, propz on that, the hoom is simply the best round eire, the best track out the whole fuckin album, and the whole TRshady thang, Kez sounds very good on this, the voice got loud n angry, good thang, the lyrics hit hard, third verse is the best... fav track of the album 100/10

4.House Of Commons
???? hahaha... nice listenin

5.The Patriot
Didn't liked this track, the mixin is good, sounds professional.. hahaha bah bah bah bah bah hahah, the hook is cool 8/10

6.The Words I Should Say
strange beat, got me the feelin of MF doom, so I like that, but your voice is too low on this, can't deny its a great track n da lyrics bouncin 8/10

7.This Is Why
One of the best tracks of the album, the pain reflected on it gots a deep listen on it, this was one nice listen, the beat is too damn good, the hook git up real nice, the lyrics on the hook wuz liken, nice track 9/10

8.The Last Time
hmmm, the mix is great on this track, feelin political on this, the hook is good, nice slow rap theme eire, the second verse starts fine, end fine, nice track, I liked this one 9/10

9.The System
slow deep track feel, Liked this one gittin pretty deep on this, this is why you'll like my album hahaha, really felt into this track nice closing, but there's an eco part that I don't like, is that the hook?, the beat is not that great, could have a bit mo', nice track 8/10

OVERAL: 9/10

great job on this, too dope to be true, propz on this album...
one word: AMAZIN

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