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My Second Beat ..

Postby SajN » Mar 9th, '07, 17:22

Yoo ..

Some of u have surely listened to my first beat ... Right?

This is my second and better than the first one .. I Promise ..

http://www.zshare.net/audio/my-beat-non-stop-mp3-g1s.html

And please leave some feedback
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 9th, '07, 17:26

didnt listen to ur 1st beat :sweating:
but this one isnt good tho...
to be honest...it gets on my nuts :sweating:

sry man..keep it up tho...got potencial in it...fo sure :flower:
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Postby SajN » Mar 9th, '07, 17:29

Yeah I know .. I havent tried so much ..
I understand u .. therefore I ask for feedback .. So I can know what I need to change in my beats and stuffs ;)
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Postby mart85 » Mar 9th, '07, 17:48

it depends on what you wanted to do... if you wanted to make a big rap beat, it's not quite perfect yet lol

I like the drum pattern, it was well done... but like I said, if you wanted make a regular rap beat, you'd need to add more to it... at least the rhythm is nice which is essential lol...

and I wasn't really feeling the synths/pads/instruments in it, sorry.... but it's not bad, you have good elements, you just need to practise more, or pay attention to beats you like and try to notice what are the elements that you like in those beats etc...
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Postby SajN » Mar 9th, '07, 17:52

Ok .. I get it ..
Tnx ..

I just made something .. It was just to check how to make beats..

But I will practise more ..
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