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Bar Ft. Mc Maybe - Can You Flow (produced by Mr. Kooman)

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Bar Ft. Mc Maybe - Can You Flow (produced by Mr. Kooman)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 14th, '07, 18:06

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInf ... ID=5113651


i aint to great on it but maybe's Verse is awesome as usual

feed on the track, i original only did it to help my mixing :sweating:

if soundclick dont work for ya tell me and ill zshare it :happy:


ZSHARE

http://www.zshare.net/audio/bar-ft-mcma ... w-mp3.html
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 14th, '07, 18:11

dont work.... :(
and damn was pretty fast cuz i read ur topic bout collab and now..
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Postby AspirinE » Mar 14th, '07, 18:11

soundclick: "error loading file"



I want a new link.. NOW
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 14th, '07, 18:17

^ zsharing now, my soundclick is just fucked sometimes :( :(
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 14th, '07, 18:23

zshared up now :happy:
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Postby AspirinE » Mar 14th, '07, 18:32

umm.....

Bar's flow was wack to be honest lol, i just cant take the irony of listening to "i can flow and i can rhyme" :p

and the mixing, u made the layovers too layout.


you can do better, i felt like being harsh this time. :smoking:



Mc maybe however rocked the beat :smoking: it was perfect.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 14th, '07, 18:33

McMaybe wrote:haha i like it, your first verse is pure fire... hook could be better, but nice ass verses, some of your best lyrics in my opinion


thx man :happy: yeh the hook, had trouble with it i put the bit like "can you flow" in then just did the other bit to fill it up lol

again thx for the verse man :worship:
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Postby shady45 » Mar 14th, '07, 18:36

I like trshady user music.
This is shit,homie
thx :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 14th, '07, 18:37

AspirinE wrote:umm.....

Bar's flow was wack to be honest lol, i just cant take the irony of listening to "i can flow and i can rhyme" :p

and the mixing, u made the layovers too layout.


you can do better, i felt like being harsh this time. :smoking:



Mc maybe however rocked the beat :smoking: it was perfect.



:( :tounge2: :tounge2: :tounge2:


lol yeh i know ive did better :sweating: i didnt think id end up with maybe on the track or else i would have put a hell of alot more in it :sweating:

n thx for the mixing tip :worship:
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Postby mart85 » Mar 14th, '07, 18:39

bar, your first verse verse was nice... but like ASP said, the layovers are a bit too loud, you'd need to boost the volume of the center vocal track and lower the layovers a bit... but it was cool :happy: and I thought in the second verse you missed a bit of energy compared to the first one

the chorus is cool, it could be mixed more on time with the beat tho (the first part that goes with the flute melody) :sweating:

but overall it's a nice attempt :8)

and maybe, nice verse as usual... great flow :8)
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 14th, '07, 18:41

mart85 wrote:bar, your first verse verse was nice... but like ASP said, the layovers are a bit too loud, you'd need to boost the volume of the center vocal track and lower the layovers a bit... but it was cool :happy: and I thought in the second verse you missed a bit of energy compared to the first one

the chorus is cool, it could be mixed more on time with the beat tho (the first part that goes with the flute melody) :sweating:

but overall it's a nice attempt :8)

and maybe, nice verse as usual... great flow :8)


thank you :worship: imma keep practicing :happy:

n maybe we got to do another track were i can try keep up with you :whistle: :whistle: hence the word TRY lol
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Postby AspirinE » Mar 14th, '07, 18:44

Bar wrote:
AspirinE wrote:umm.....

Bar's flow was wack to be honest lol, i just cant take the irony of listening to "i can flow and i can rhyme" :p

and the mixing, u made the layovers too layout.


you can do better, i felt like being harsh this time. :smoking:



Mc maybe however rocked the beat :smoking: it was perfect.



:( :tounge2: :tounge2: :tounge2:


lol yeh i know ive did better :sweating: i didnt think id end up with maybe on the track or else i would have put a hell of alot more in it :sweating:

n thx for the mixing tip :worship:



Im just saying man, if u want people to listen put energy into that shit.
U rapped like u just downed a bottle of vodka.

After ur Ep, u just took a step back. Stepping back is suicide, especially if ur bootleggin that mixtape u put out and u want people to listen, the single tracks might get their expectations lowered.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 14th, '07, 18:52

^ yeh i know :( meh ill sort it :happy:
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 14th, '07, 18:56

dl now leave feed soon :happy:
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 14th, '07, 19:11

em50inem wrote:dl now leave feed soon :happy:

hmmmm....maybe was killa on this :8)
and bar u could do better ;) ........ its alright :flower:
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