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All she wants - did you re-mix or re-record this sounds alot better, nice clear flow nice lyrics nice beat, good feel to it, the sampling is kool, this is alot better than last time, really what did you do ?
lol anywae real nice track alot better than last time i heard it ( unless im getting this mixed up with a different track ) the third verse part at the start is kool lol nice effect, right now im typing till the track finishes
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Pain In My Word - ok beat is dark, intro is kool, different style form you, nice track deep truthuly like this style from you, nice dark beat with a good feel and nice piano to it,chorus is a little weird, but i like it it isnt bad but i think it could be a little better, second verse is good again, the lyrics on this aint really special but the flow is nice and the track is true words so it dont need to be lyrical - favourite track so far ( this will change as i listen obv. ) - real nice track
the outro is nice a bitstrange with the singing but kool i guess
Lord Forgive me - didnt think id here this track on this beat, gives it a orginal feel i guess, nice lrics flow is good, chorus is pretty kool nice feel to it, could be mixed betetr some more effects but nice none the less, really like the second verse i dunno why and the emotion in this track is good, you never really had a problem with emotion ever but sometimes your quality ruins you puting emotion in but it didnt this time, nice work man
hotel california - nice beat, flow is good so far and nice lay'd back feel, lyrics are ok, chorus is again a little strange with the singing i think it just needs better mixing ( IMO ) and it could work but it isnt agonisanly bad i meen i can listen to it and it doesnt through me off, second verse is kool aswell, best thing about this is the feel and flow to it, the singing at the end works, sounded good to me and it was nice, another solid track - probly my favourite so far -
Words Could destroy - better rythming here, beat is cool aswell, flow is on point aswell, lyrics are real nice, and respect on them aswell man people who listen will know what i mean lol
, chorus is better on this ( a rapping chorus lol ) nice work on it , random is better on this, he controls his tone of voice better than usual and his lyrics are nice and he got flow, better work from you randy man keep it up the end of the 2nd verse sorta made me shit myself...roflmao it was sudden, 3rd verse again is kool man, only thing about this is the name and chorus sorta dont fit the feel of the verses, but it works to a point aswell... another solid track, lol at me not knowing what the outro means lol j/k
Konvicts music - faster flow, soul survivor sample right ? the chorus is sorta weird again but it isnt bad, and i aint really feeling the beat its just to simple and empty-ish, the evrses are kool though good flow and nice lyrics, i aint really feeling this track just coz i dont enjoy the beat but its still a nice track i just dont really like it - third verse is the bsst one
Tragedy - i like this beat really nice feel to it, flow is good on this and lyrics are nice aswell, really enjoying this one, chorus is the best one on the tape so far, catchy goes to beat perfect real godo chorus, second verse is good aswell same stuff as the first flow + lyrics lol at the end of second verse "i never ment to cheat on youm oh wait you never knew"
third verse is good aswell - this is probly my favourite so far like the beat and the flow on it
get on the floor - this beat is different dont like it that much, the flow and everyhting is ok and the lyrics are ok for this type of track i guess, i just dont like the beats and you cant really do a club banger without perfect wuality- worse track so far-
broken down - beats kool on this one, the singin on this one is werd again needs better mixing or quality for this to work..ever, but it isnt really bad, oh ok your singing the whole thing ok the singing is weird on this , oh rapping, the rapping is beter nice fast flwo nice lyrics alot better than the singing lol , good verse on this
Riot! - beat si kool on this one, chorus is weird, verse is kool and nice lyrics and flow is kool,
second verse is better than 1st, good flow on it. solid track chorus was just ifyy
aint that a bitch - already left feed
soul affected - nice beat on this one, flow on this is kool, lyrics are ok concept is kool,
chorus is one of the betetr one son the tape, nice work on it man , other 2 verses are the same good work man - solid track -
halloween - you already know i like the beat and sound effects lol aint feeding myself so ill just rap along to my verse
, i like the chorus its funny catchy and kool at the same time lol , your flow on this one is sick, lyrics are kool aswell, lol you kill it you fag
lol j/p lol but its one of my fav verses form you, kez's flow on this si good just dorps one or twice but he gets back on, the effect thigny is really kool, and he got good lyrical rpessense on it solid verse form him - would be my fav track if i wasnt on it coz it sounds gay if my fav track is my feature lol -
lol ok i got to hit my bed soon im real tired so ill give quick feed ont he rest n edit this post tomorrow with proper feed on them
in my G ride - beat sounded good and choruses sounded nice, the verses eemed kool aswell
survival - beats is good, sounds as if i would like itt deep style on verses, guy at the end sounded..uhm kool but ill ill listen proper tomorrow, chorus was kool btw
sailing out - beat is really good liked the sound of this and your flow was good for what i heard
overall - you got flow man and dedication to get a full LP recorded, just try get your quality up man it ruins alot of stuff or you, if you get your quality up and your lyrical game you will be sick as hell man, practice on the singing style and again with better quality it could work, keep making the beats and keep doin what ya doin and the next LP will be sick as hell, so really just work on your ylrical game getting better qualityc oz your flow is kool on mostly everything, overall i enjoyed the Lp man and it was a good listen, ill leave proper fee don the last three track tomorrow right now i got to sleep, but ill will go back and lsiten to some of the track of this so great work man
dam that ^^ is a shit load of typing, enjoy reading it
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