First Verse Instrumental - "Ampecious"

[Tash8]

Hello,

this will probably be the first verse, but in instrumental...

I'm just starting to pick up on the stuff soo please give me some constructive criticism.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/ampecious-mp3.html

Thanks Please feed!

[Hadez]

soo please give me some constructive criticism.

givin the above statement, please dont take this personally .

the drums sounded like a 3 year old bangin on his new drum set, it had no rhythem to it. the guitar didnt flow right, the end of the notes were too immediate, like somebody in a car hittin the gas and the break rapidly.

but you're new to it so you'll get better when you understand how to use the program . props and keep it up.

[DJ.Parker]

its all messed up. Dont u think its best 4 u 2 write down the lyrics and then create a beat which suits it?

[Hadez]

its all messed up. Dont u think its best 4 u 2 write down the lyrics and then create a beat which suits it?

i do it the opposite . i make a beat then write the lyrics to flow wit the beat.

[DJ.Parker]

its all messed up. Dont u think its best 4 u 2 write down the lyrics and then create a beat which suits it?

i do it the opposite . i make a beat then write the lyrics to flow wit the beat.

yeah but since he's in touch with writing rather than singing it might be easy to write it down 1st But its all up to tash

@ tash. Keep practicing using the sofware....u'll do better

[AspirinE]

Ummm..


before u start attempting mixing down beats, learn these things:

- Tempo option on the FL display [normal hip hop beat tempo varies around 90-100] ... and the number of beats per bar
- learn ur patterns, the snare usually kicks at a steady rate in most cases
- dont make up random note patterns if u cant picture a melody, it really doesnt sound that great. If ur no musician- use samples.

and a beat should normally have
- Drums
- melody
- baseline that enforces the melody.

after u learn to do an acual simple 8 beat pattern, proceed learning ur mixing.


as for that shit u posted, dont waste time on stuff like that, spend it experimenting an learning.

[Tash8]

thanks for all the comments

^^ lol that's been what i've trying to do, i've imagined the beat but it never sounds like what I want it...

is there a tutorial that i can follow to make like a beat for the first time ?

that way i get what to do for the next one

[Hadez]

asp said it best.... i didnt know that technical stuff, but i agree with him.