RapReject Freestyle

by **Tash8** » Apr 12th, '07, 01:48

Hello,

this is my first audio and first beat...
http://www.zshare.net/audio/rapreject-mp3-1s7.html

It's a simple beat because i think that fit the audio.. TBH I don't think it's that great but it's my first try.

constructive criticism only please

Thanks

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Apr 12th, '07, 01:50

just get beats form soundclick man a beat is lke 80% of the track

by **Tash8** » Apr 12th, '07, 01:53

^^ I know but i wanna learn to make beats, cuz that's what i wanna do lol I don't care about the vocals i only did that cuz the beat sounded plain without vocals.

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Apr 12th, '07, 01:55

Tash8 wrote:^^ I know but i wanna learn to make beats, cuz that's what i wanna do lol I don't care about the vocals i only did that cuz the beat sounded plain without vocals.

oh well you need to work on beats alot join some beat making forums :happy:

by **Tash8** » Apr 12th, '07, 01:56

i know and thanks i'll look into joining one.

by **Phantom** » Apr 12th, '07, 02:03

to be honest,

terrible, ill give this a 0/10

the beat was terrible and u didnt speak up

speak up!

work on the beats but i know your trying man, its only gonna get better from here (it has to lol)

keep workin at it and come back to this thread in 4 months and see what improvement youve made

by **Tash8** » Apr 12th, '07, 02:11

yea thanks working on a different one,

hey i dont mind the score you gave me cuz u explained it and that's all i care for, so dont' be afraid to tell me it's shit as long as you explain it..

the beat was ment to be simple because i wanted it simple but i'll try harder this time

thanks

more feed.

by **howie1360** » Apr 12th, '07, 02:26

you need to turn the mic up or speak MUCH louder or turn the beat down.

i agree with phantom, you need to improve the beat somehow

by **Global** » Apr 12th, '07, 02:28

Tash man are you a mouse SPEAK the fuck up.. :smoking:

yea i agree with Phantom in couple of months youll get better for sure :smoking:

by **Tash8** » Apr 12th, '07, 02:39

I think my new one which i'll up in a min. my voice is way louder but you guys can tell me if it is or not.

by **DJ.Parker** » Apr 12th, '07, 06:51

the 1st u posted was terrible. Mainly because of the not so good beat. And dont just speak start rhyming with a loud voice:happy: (hope i made sense)

by **$0 R3@L** » Apr 12th, '07, 10:00

erm pretty awful man,gotta step ya game up by 100x

by **Tash8** » Apr 12th, '07, 15:04

fuck my beats are going no where, i just suck at them...

but i'm not gonna quit... but FUCK.

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