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**NEW SINGLE** "Call Me Out" HOOK EFFECT SORTED!!

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**NEW SINGLE** "Call Me Out" HOOK EFFECT SORTED!!

Postby HAYZI » Apr 12th, '07, 19:38

its been a while since i released anything, ive been workin n ive got a few tracks recorded and about 5 more written but not yet recorded.

ive got three projects in the works:

"Above The Below" My LP

"7 Deadly Sins" an EP

and "Take-Off" a mixtape of all the other tracks which arent goin on either of the others

the EP and tape will be out in the next 2/3 months and the LP could be a lil longer and may not get released on TRshady dependin on how good it is :sweating:


anyway for now this is a track just to keep my name in the mix, i hope u enjoy it and please leave me sum feedback :flower:

Call Me Out.mp3 - 3.51MB ZSHARE
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 12th, '07, 22:01

i shall find a way to bootleg that album :shifty:

lol j/k man, id buy you shit :smoking:

i donwloaded the track n ill listen in about 15 minutes n leave feed :happy:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 12th, '07, 22:16

i dont like the chorus too much, just the effects through me off :sweating:

beat is different good though i like it..you make it ?

the verses are great, there were points were you stopped n left blank parts it sorta sounded random, it didnt ruin anything but it might have sounded better if you added a fill in or something to make it flow better

apart form that everything was great, lyrically and flow

i liked the outro

and thats really it, ill be listening to this for a while just for the verses :D
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Postby Speech » Apr 12th, '07, 23:10

is it just me or is your quality lil below what you deserved or should have?

flow was great.....but i must say i didn like that hook

i'm lookin for your tape anyway so keep it up g

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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 12th, '07, 23:38

didnt really like the hook the effects and lyricaly it was pretty bad :sweating:

The verse was pretty good,the delivernce was the best thing,full of passion.
Lyrics was good from what i could hear.The concept wernt nothing really new but twas done good for what it was.

Good track overall and no doubt the tape gone be hot.
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Postby mart85 » Apr 13th, '07, 03:28

sorry to tell you again, but I didn'T really like the chorus either, with the effects :sweating: maybe it's because the quality wasn't that great, it may work with better quality, but I wasn't really feeling it...

but the rest is reaaaally tight man... great job as usual, looking forward to whatever comes next for you (including you know what :shifty:) like so real said, your delivery was top notch
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Postby HAYZI » Apr 13th, '07, 17:25

thnks for the feedback ppl i appreciate it,


yeh i fukd up the hook i spent at least half an hour just lookin for a good effect and it sounded good before i fukd around! but i ran out of time and had to leave it as it is


@bar - i didnt make the beat ....i wish!

@so real- i wasnt goin for a groundbreakin track i'm savin them for my LP, i just wanted a lil sumin sumin so no one 4got bout me

@shadyhomie - by quality i hope u mean soundquality lol,

@killa - u mite even get a freebie ;)

@mart - yeh whats cookin ;) should be worth the wait

thakns for the feedback ppl ill have the hook sorted when its put on the mixtape


any more feed.......??
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Postby HAYZI » Apr 13th, '07, 17:47

anyone who wants to download/save it/hear it again, ive sorted the hook so it so the effect and therefore the sound quality is much better


anymore/new feedback is more than welcome
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 13th, '07, 17:52

alot better without the effect :happy:
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Postby HAYZI » Apr 13th, '07, 18:00

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:alot better without the effect :happy:



thanks man i hope it was worth ur time listenin :)


btw ive got u down to write and spit a hook for one of my tracks if ur up for it.......
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 13th, '07, 18:01

HAYZI wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:alot better without the effect :happy:



thanks man i hope it was worth ur time listenin :)


btw ive got u down to write and spit a hook for one of my tracks if ur up for it.......


yeh im up for anything :D

i can start recording again on monday
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Postby HAYZI » Apr 13th, '07, 18:06

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:
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,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:alot better without the effect :happy:



thanks man i hope it was worth ur time listenin :)


btw ive got u down to write and spit a hook for one of my tracks if ur up for it.......


yeh im up for anything :D

i can start recording again on monday




cool i sort out the beat when i get the chance and pm u
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Postby mart85 » Apr 13th, '07, 19:22

yeah I prefer the chorus that way :happy: sick track :worship:
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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 14th, '07, 04:39

nice track mayn

strong voice rite there... the hook efect is crazy

nice song mayn... just make ur voice a bit louder on the hook..

and don't loose your breath mayn..... sometimes you get to low

bttp: nice track mayn :worship: :worship:
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 14th, '07, 04:46

If that first part was the chorus, i still didn't like it because of the hollow sound or whatever.

The verses were hot, I like how you highlight your rhymes and shit..

Keep it up.
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