Lonely Roads

by **Tash8** » Apr 17th, '07, 22:06

I was just trying out a few things, you know for practice on mixing and shit.. So lyrics aren't that great...

but feed please:
Good Quality:
lonelyroads.mp3 - 4.79MB
Low Quality:
lr.mp3 - 1.60MB

Thanks

by **Nu Syd** » Apr 17th, '07, 22:12

any chance of a lower mb version for the dial up ppl here, 64khz or something :unsure:

by **Tash8** » Apr 17th, '07, 22:15

how can i make it lower?

by **Nu Syd** » Apr 17th, '07, 22:17

u know when u save your song,u save in 192khz or something right,load it in your program again,mixcraft 3,then save it again but choose 64khz this time under mp3,and remember to call it something else,or you will overwrite your normal quality one, 64khz should make it 1mb around.

by **Tash8** » Apr 17th, '07, 22:23

lr.mp3 - 1.60MB

here ya go

by **$0 R3@L** » Apr 17th, '07, 22:41

singing for you dude is a huge no no.Only sing if you can and im sorry you cant.Not only are you singin bad your singing out of time with the beat.

The flow on this track was a lil better along with the lyrics.However again your rapping out of sync with the beat and your delievery is terrible.Its like your reading quickly and not putting any emotion or flow into it at all.

Its pretty damn awful dude,sorry to sound harsh but pussy-footing around the truth does no good for anyone.

Keep trying.

by **Nu Syd** » Apr 17th, '07, 22:42

thanks,downloadin now

this beat is cool,nice tone

i aint feelin the singing,u should rap it IMO

oh u did rap lol,rappin sounds better once u started it, u need to ride the beat better man, i hear the hissing from your acapella,use noise reduction if mixcraft has it,i think it has,and try some light reverbing, keep at it tash

by **Tash8** » Apr 17th, '07, 22:42

thanks, the few things I was working on were:

Flow
Beat Syncing

I guess I only improved one of them

by **B.A.D.** » Apr 17th, '07, 23:35

its not that you can't sing... cuz errbody can... but you need to catch the flow and have an extreme good quality

the rap improved a lot mayn... your voice sounds clear, n u got more flow on this one, lyrics are fine... in the first verse you did good

second verse you lost the emotion...

this one was better

by **Tash8** » Apr 17th, '07, 23:37

thanks ^ exactly what i was aiming for,

better flow and stuff

I'll just keep practicing.

by **IceAxe** » Apr 17th, '07, 23:55

yeah man, singing is not for you...

the beat was nice, lyrics seemed okay, but you need to put some kind of emotion into it, some parts you were kinda quiet, like your trying not to wake someone up.

flow is noticeably better.

by **Hadez** » Apr 17th, '07, 23:58

iceaxe187 wrote:yeah man, singing is not for you...

the beat was nice, lyrics seemed okay, but you need to put some kind of emotion into it, some parts you were kinda quiet, like your trying not to wake someone up.

flow is noticeably better.

imma be different and say he can do the singin if he wants. i think it'd be fine but he needs emotion in the singin too. he sounds like he's embarassed to sing so he kinda has that "i dont want anybody to know im singin" sound to it.