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Do We Deserve To Live Ft. Big Axd (produced by me)

Postby randomghost » Apr 25th, '07, 12:36

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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 25th, '07, 14:34

chorus is sorta crindge worthy

first verse is nice you need to up your flow a little, but you control your voice alot better, lyrics are nice

second verse, nice flow by XD , lyics were sorta simple though


and man you should have your mp3's at like 128kb or somehting...this was at 80kb :whistle:
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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 26th, '07, 00:32

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:chorus is sorta crindge worthy

first verse is nice you need to up your flow a little, but you control your voice alot better, lyrics are nice

second verse, nice flow by XD , lyics were sorta simple though


and man you should have your mp3's at like 128kb or somehting...this was at 80kb :whistle:


thnx haha....

nice song random..... bump
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Postby Call Me Pik » Apr 26th, '07, 01:59

i agree with bar nice song kudnt really hear the hook that well maybe kuz it was on 80 k gud werk
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Postby randomghost » Apr 26th, '07, 05:08

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:chorus is sorta crindge worthy

first verse is nice you need to up your flow a little, but you control your voice alot better, lyrics are nice

second verse, nice flow by XD , lyics were sorta simple though


and man you should have your mp3's at like 128kb or somehting...this was at 80kb :whistle:
thanx for the feed bar, actually the beat was 128 kb before i sended to x, when he send it back it was like dat :happy:

and thanx for the feed call me pik :flower:
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 26th, '07, 05:37

i thought the chorus was weird but the verses were ill :D
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Postby randomghost » Apr 26th, '07, 10:09

bump :8)
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Postby $0 R3@L » Apr 26th, '07, 13:03

hook need more attention but the verses seemed great.Random has defo improved man and big x was good also.I like it man,keep em coming.
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Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 26th, '07, 13:11

yea hook is kinda weird with that singin park :unsure:
big x did good on this... :flower:
and yea random u get better from wut i heard b4..... :worship:
good track... :flower:
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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 26th, '07, 19:18

woooord!!!!


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Postby Xray » Apr 27th, '07, 01:03

dope fucken track man random did great and big axd LMAO @ ur singing hahahaha hecktik track
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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 27th, '07, 02:54

Sajjad wrote:dope fucken track man random did great and big axd LMAO @ ur singing hahahaha hecktik track


hahaha yeah!

thnx bro
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Postby Inches » Apr 27th, '07, 03:01

The hook is pretty messed up.
Your allright, kinda eminem ish. I dont like your sound much but whateverr.
Ax-D was pretty good, he flowed well.

Nice track.
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Postby randomghost » Apr 29th, '07, 09:29

thanx everybody...all feeds appreciate it :worship: :worship: ... and big props to big axd for inspiring me in production :flower:
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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 30th, '07, 00:01

randomghost wrote:thanx everybody...all feeds appreciate it :worship: :worship: ... and big props to big axd for inspiring me in production :flower:


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