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[NEW SHIT] Hip Hop

Postby Kez » May 22nd, '07, 21:31

Well since Third Time Lucky is being slept on (which i'm not really surprised at, my old style was admittedly a bit repetitive. Not that i want people to ignore it though.) i thought i'd post a new track i made trying to accustom to the MC style.

As for the beat, it's from "Limited Edition" on Soundclick. It's on for free download so i can imagine no reason why i can't use it.

Er, here it is.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/01-hip-hop-mp3-neg.html
It's also on my Myspace
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 22nd, '07, 21:35

like i said man, new style i alot better for a neatrul listener

as for the track, defiantly my favrouite form you, chorus is simple but effective better to do that than try somethign fancy and ruin it, flow over the whoel track is great, lyrics are sick, just keep pacticing this style man you alreayd got flow n the ryhmes are there even if the need tweaked up a bit although in most of your other tracks its story telling witch is always harder to use multis and stuff on, as you can tell coz this tracks lyrics are on a differnet level than your other track

just keep practicing this

and people listen to this dam song and give feed!!

kez is one of the few members who gives full reviews on all tapes posted, when he recieves none in return

in other words dont be a dick and just give some feed
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Postby Tash8 » May 22nd, '07, 21:53

well check after i get my new comp installed :D
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Postby Kez » May 22nd, '07, 22:13

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Postby Tomega » May 22nd, '07, 22:16

I love the accent in the words "hip hop"

nice track, beat could be better, but rap is cool..

keep doing it and you'll improve much more.. maybe i can make some beats for ya..
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Postby Kez » May 22nd, '07, 22:27

Hey, i'm open
Just PM me about it, show me some of ya beats and if i like one i'll use it :D

And thanks
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Postby Tash8 » May 22nd, '07, 22:55

its pretty good, but one thing it seems yours just like umm what you say

umm your just spitting while reading but with no intensity.. but other than it it was pretty good
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Postby Kez » May 22nd, '07, 23:07

Tash8 wrote:its pretty good, but one thing it seems yours just like umm what you say

umm your just spitting while reading but with no intensity.. but other than it it was pretty good


Nah i was going for a more mild delivery with this song :zipped:
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Postby IceAxe » May 22nd, '07, 23:10

it was pretty good... there wasnt too much intensity in it, but you were goin for a milder delivery and it's still better than any of my audio atm, so :worship: :worship:

and i would've reviewed ya tape, except it takes me like 5 hours to download albums... but i'll try it when i got some time
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Postby Tash8 » May 22nd, '07, 23:23

Kez wrote:
Tash8 wrote:its pretty good, but one thing it seems yours just like umm what you say

umm your just spitting while reading but with no intensity.. but other than it it was pretty good


Nah i was going for a more mild delivery with this song :zipped:


so like a soothing song, aite i understand :) then yea it's good
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Postby mart85 » May 23rd, '07, 16:29

nice track kez... altho I wasn't really feeling the beat so it was hard to get into the song, but your flow and lyrics were nice... even if you wanted a milder delivery, I thought it could be slightly better, but it's still good... overall good solid track :happy: keep at it

oh and I'll try to leave feed on your album, but I barely have time to listen to music anymore :(
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