Mixtape Update: June 15 Release + Fight Music Single

[die2nite]

Hey,
Some of you may know I've been working on a mixtape. This is my first real project and I've probably been working on it for the past like 8 or so months. Of course most of the stuff on it has been written in the past 3 months. Anyways I solidified a tracklist a couple weeks ago and have rerecorded all the songs to the best of my ability. Just need to make a little outro and it will be complete. So here's the tracklist.

What No One Dared: Vol. 1
Wordsmith Intro
Hill Hop
This Is War
Grey Skies
Soldier
Doctor Doctor
Fight Music Freestyle
Fight Music
Big Shit Poppin
I Hate Your Life (A Statement on the Game)
Fuck You (Skit)
Call This Life?
Don

[bg_pop]

I like the song
Did you make the beat ???/

[$0 R3@L]

not bad man,decent track.

[mart85]

yeah the track was quite good, nice job on this

[ThomasAguanis]

listening now.
this beat seems like its gonna be great already, just by the intro.
flow is nice. i like it. nice lyrics too. i like the coffin save me part.
chorus is alright, sounds good with your voice.
second verse, basically the same as the 1st, you seem consistent with it. a few parts were hard to understand though and flow goes off at a point or two but doesn't take away from the track any.
3rd verse beginning was a bit hard to understand, seems like you stumble a few times. Really liked the arm to the wrist, blade to the neck lines. near the end it's again a bit hard to make out at points. maybe it's just my speakers though.

overall:
you had good lyrics. you're flow was good too but seemed like you struggled at parts with the lyrics and flow, which I;m sure you can easily fix as you record more. voice seemed alright too, maybe work on pronunciation a bit but that happened to everyone at times. keep it up man

[die2nite]

Props guys. Thanks Thomas for the in depth review.

[B.A.D.]

the beat is great

the mixin is amazing too.... I like the lyrics oon verse 1, good flow n structure
the hook is good, all good... I'm likin it mayn

verse 2 starts geniousy, good thang eire, also loved the hook

verse 3 has some more easy lyrics, but also the verse is good

nice trak mayn, lookin forward to your tape

[randomghost]

beat is crazyyyy....flow is hot...rhymes is cool...lookin forward man

[die2nite]

Props on the feed guys.

30-3: Never heard someone say my mixing was amazing before so thanks . And the last verse I know what you mean, I felt the lyrics were a bit subpar compared to the rest of the song as well, but nothing to do now haha.

[Tash8]

you got a nice flow

the lyrics are cool

your pronounciation is a problem, its not like your not saying it right it's just your adding saliva with it or something

the chorus let's just say I couldn't understand half of it, it wasn't clear. it doesn't matter how good your lyrics are if we can't hear them...

but you got a nice flow

EDIT: you know there's a "t" at the end of fight right? it's not figh