Chris ft Tash-Bounce!!check it...

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yo wuz crackin...new collab with my homeboy tash
http://www.zshare.net/audio/21968326830fd0/

^enjoy peepz...and feed

big motherfuckin propz to sajjad fo mixing...masterpiece thx a lot man
...hope ya like it


edit: here are the lyrics...idea of tash

[Chorus - Chris + Tash8]
Yo yo bounce bounce we all bouncing
hit up the girls blow up the housing
no need fo coke and no need for ouncing
lets bounce bounce bounce we all writing
chicks on the lawn with no one fighting
police is gone with no citing bounce bounce

[Verse 1 - Tash8]
bitch turn around bounce-that-ass
your as smoking as an ounce-of-grass
your body's fire from mouth-to-ass
time to strip your blouse-so-fast
relax and put the earth-on-hold
let's fuck no time for birth-control
let's get back to serious-subjects
fuck bitches and curious-puppets
who get so nosy-in-mind
and you will only, only-find
bitches, hoes, and the dopey-kind
the others are the mopey-eyed
who clean and cook but got no looks
also if you don't like our hook
then you fuckers are taking-drugs
or you all are hating-fucks

[Chorus - Chris + Tash8]
Yo yo bounce bounce we all bouncing
hit up the girls blow up the housing
no need fo coke and no need for ouncing
lets bounce bounce bounce we all writing
chicks on the lawn with no one fighting
police is gone with no citing bounce bounce

[Verse 2 - Chris]
Walkin in the club see my homie tash wuzzup
im like what the fuck he

Last edited by °[~CHR!$~]° on Jun 9th, '07, 16:34, edited 1 time in total.

[codyp]

...Well the first few moments of the first verse sounded like I was listening to William hung. Thought it was going to be just a cool voice thing to go into a verse, but it was the verse. So I didn't really care for the sound of your voice too much. The second verse was pretty good but there was no emotion that I could sense. The chorus and the second verse sounded like it was recorded while some one was trying to sleep.

To me over all it just wasn't a strong enough song. The lyrics we're okay, the chorus was decent. I think if it was delivered more powerfully I would listen to it again.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

^thx much fo checkin....
well im the 2nd guy....tash is the 1st one....
and we two are beginners....well its my 3rd real audio now and tash just started with this rap game too...hehe should be no exuse or somthin just to let ya know...
and we/i will work on delievery fo sure
thx again man

[MoBrat]

hmmm nice mixin SA

Chorus sounds good i like it
Tash's Verse sounds good, at some parts i cant understand what ur saying but that could be cause i got a xbox game blasting beside me lol....tash that last part(later in the track) was kool i liked that simple but catchy

Chris flow is good lyrics a little simple but sill good

OVERALL nice track guys keep up the good work...and SA thats some sick mixing

[codyp]

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[°[~CHR!$~]°]

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[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

chris, you should invest on a new mic now man

flows on everything is actually kool, apart form what you did with ya voice this is defo tash's best verse

chirs you did good to your just starting and you have flow (witch alot of people dont when starting, not excluding myself when i started) its just really simple, and you slip sometimes but eveyrone slips, so you should just keep doin what ya doin and get a better mic do you can express yaself on the mic more coz the delivery on your stuff is holding back an enjoyable verse

and great mixing by Sajjad, ive heard these guys raw accapellas and dam you did great man

[Tash8]

propz on all the feed

and yea i messed with my voice on this, i told that to chris and i was trying something new i guess it wasn't good that's what i thought

and propz to sajjad a lot damn best mixing i've heard.

[Xray]

@ codyp thanx for breaking it down man appreciate it

@ mobrat thanx bro means a shit load of appreciation

@ bar lmao yea the original acas were okay but i made em better i guess but it took me 1 week mixing this track lmao << due to my laziness

and great job to both chris and tash

keep that feed comming ppl

[Hadez]

i dunno wut u guys are saying

all i heard was "bounce" durin the chorus, then a couple "fuck"s durin the verses.

but the beat was cool , n the chorus could be catchy i guess.

Tash's best so far. propz to both of u.

[Tash8]

weird, dunno how you couldn't understand

but whateva propz on the feed

I reocrded this verse about 2 weeks ago, so i should hopefully have improved from it and i'll never higher my voice that much again.

[Xray]

i dunno wut u guys are saying

all i heard was "bounce" durin the chorus, then a couple "fuck"s durin the verses.

but the beat was cool , n the chorus could be catchy i guess.

Tash's best so far. propz to both of u.

damn wat hashish u on *jokes*
thanx for feeding B

[IceAxe]

Ok... having heard the pre-stages of this track many times, I'm kinda sick of this beat. It was nice when I first heard it... but now it just play-out for me.

Mixing: Sajjad... you're my hero good job

Verse 1: Um.... Tash... your flow and all that shit has improved a lot... but your voice kinda kills the vibe of this. Lyrics seemed alright....

Chorus: semi-catchy... but not all that great

Verse 2: flow could be improved... lyrically seemed ok... your accent could make for a sick flow/delivery when you get better

Verse 3: see review of verse 1

[codyp]

I reocrded this verse about 2 weeks ago, so i should hopefully have improved from it and i'll never higher my voice that much again.

Haha I wouldn't say that. Good vocal range keeps things interesting. Monotone gets boring, just need to learn where it fits and where it doesn't.

[Tash8]

^ yea i thought it'd fit to a song like this haha, guess i was wrong