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Wipe Away My Tears...Call Me Pik Solo

Postby Call Me Pik » Jun 19th, '07, 20:54

wipe away my tears.mp3 - 11.86MB

This song is about a girl who has been abused i came up with this song for her after she told me all the problems she had the beat is from eminem's cleaning out my closet hope you like it feedback
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Re: Wipe Away My Tears...Call Me Pik Solo

Postby Tash8 » Jun 19th, '07, 23:31

i agree with bar when he said you can't help but comparing it to other artists, and i can't help but compare this to eminem's version

i gotta say that was pretty sick verses, i disliked the chorus but that's about it...

nice job
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Re: Wipe Away My Tears...Call Me Pik Solo

Postby Call Me Pik » Jun 23rd, '07, 08:06

yeah thats why i tried to make it diff but i would compare it to the original by eminem too thnks for the feed
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Re: Wipe Away My Tears...Call Me Pik Solo

Postby Sleepy » Jun 23rd, '07, 12:48

dont really like the chorus

love the verses though
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Re: Wipe Away My Tears...Call Me Pik Solo

Postby randomghost » Jun 23rd, '07, 15:20

some crazy shit from u pik :8) ...some real hot flow :y: ...good job on it man :y:
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Re: Wipe Away My Tears...Call Me Pik Solo

Postby AspirinE » Jun 23rd, '07, 16:55

Good song man :b:

I like it by most part, although i personally think you could improve delivery, the lyrics are good though, nice concepting. :y:

looking forward to more.
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Re: Wipe Away My Tears...Call Me Pik Solo

Postby Call Me Pik » Jun 24th, '07, 17:27

thnks for the feedback seems like for the most part its positive i'll werk on delivery and hook the next song i come out with thnks uppin
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Re: Wipe Away My Tears...Call Me Pik Solo

Postby MoBrat » Jun 26th, '07, 09:09

i listened to this track awhile ago and i had 2 leave feed...overall the hook aint my fav but it worked with the track....mad propz 4 this track it's not often ppl will do this for friends, i like it man keep up the good work :worship:
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Re: Wipe Away My Tears...Call Me Pik Solo

Postby Call Me Pik » Jun 30th, '07, 03:30

thnks fah the feed still uppin
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