My Song for G.A.G.E's Contest

[Rapsoldier101]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/2375838b2c59f6/

tell me what u tihnk, and the winner is suppose to have a "suprise guest" on the third verse so lets hope i win gage left me a comment bout this so i got my verse done by the next day (today) tell me what u think i really need feedback on this one, and i have been lweaving more feedback on other peoples songs

[Tash8]

real nice flow and lyrics man

[Inches]

It was good man, but GAGE completley wipes you up off the track.

[B.A.D.]

hahahaha

G.A.G.E.??

you destroyed that bitch hahaha,

didn't like this

[die2nite]

Why you jacking Joell Ortiz? In reference to your Myspace headline/tag.

"Heat rise expect to see this man on the top"
- Joell Ortiz - 125 Pt. 1 (The Bio) - Brick Bodega Chronicles

[Rapsoldier101]

Why you jacking Joell Ortiz? In reference to your Myspace headline/tag.

"Heat rise expect to see this man on the top"
- Joell Ortiz - 125 Pt. 1 (The Bio) - Brick Bodega Chronicles

i didnt kno he said that, my bad but ur kinda late cuz i been said that

and 30-3 u didnt like my verse? or jus the song, cuz i wasnt really feelin the beat but i jus wanna win the contest

[mart85]

I liked it, your flow and lyrics were nice... I liked the michael angelo line at the end

[die2nite]

Why you jacking Joell Ortiz? In reference to your Myspace headline/tag.

"Heat rise expect to see this man on the top"
- Joell Ortiz - 125 Pt. 1 (The Bio) - Brick Bodega Chronicles

i didnt kno he said that, my bad but ur kinda late cuz i been said that

and 30-3 u didnt like my verse? or jus the song, cuz i wasnt really feelin the beat but i jus wanna win the contest

Sure

[Rapsoldier101]

Why you jacking Joell Ortiz? In reference to your Myspace headline/tag.

"Heat rise expect to see this man on the top"
- Joell Ortiz - 125 Pt. 1 (The Bio) - Brick Bodega Chronicles

i didnt kno he said that, my bad but ur kinda late cuz i been said that

and 30-3 u didnt like my verse? or jus the song, cuz i wasnt really feelin the beat but i jus wanna win the contest

Sure

i dont care if u beleive me i kno the truth so ... anyone think i have a chance to win?